by lessthanperfect
...sooo sweet and lovely :) Please let them be happy together soon!
This chapter was so touching, I cant wait to read more.
Keep up the good work! :)
You dear writer are a pearl of great price. This chapter was lyrical in poetic perfection. Duke finally had something to say and did so with graceful poignancy. A perfect ending to the chapter as Luke 'just sat and stared at him till the night was through.'
I can sense their love-making sessions coming soon. They are falling in love, and Duke's opening up to Luke is a good sign. Can't want for them to undress each other, and for Luke to run his fingertips across the soft hair of Duke's chest.
oh, that has given me some serious goosebumps. geez you write well, i love the ying and yang of your main characters! i dont even need the erotic, its so nice.