All Comments on 'The Pride of a Slave Ch. 06'

Who are Kalila and Kaleb? Where are Sera and the boys...?

Did u post the wrong story? This makes no sense

OK who mixed up the stories????

I was soo excited about chapter six it feels like I've been waiting ages to read it and then I read it and it's a completely different story...

Such a disappointment. This is one of the stories that I loved, but figured that it would probably never be finished. Please tell me that it ain't so.

.....just happened....i thought i was reading about sera.

what story is this from? i thought we had vamps and weres. when did elves get added?

Got to admit I was disappointed

Not the story I started

I dropped my phone when I saw the new chapter. I was so excited to see there was an update. I yelled, "OH! SHE'S BACK!!!" And promptly hunkered down to read about Sera when I realize its not about Sera.

That is just cruel. ;______;

Think this has been incorrectly posted. Not the continuing story of The Pride of a Slave.. Very sad :( ....

Wrong story line...

not sera's story...like to know were its from though. looks pretty good.

and that the link has apparently been fixed!

Glad your back with another chapter.

Your back I love this story soo much and this chapter didn't disappoint :)

I have been waiting AGES for this story to continue! Love it!

LOVE that you are back! Such a fabulous story, more more more!!

That's a record for you. I dropped my phone.... again upon seeing an update to this story!! You have no idea how happy I am to see a new chapter. This is the only story that I would religiously check for updates.

Please keep up the great work!! So. So. SO. Happy.

You have been greatly missed! Best story series ever and please continue!!!

I'm not really into three ways, but I think it would be awesome if sera ended up their queen. But no matter what please finish!

I really hope that Sera and Dimitri eventually end up together, for some reason it just feels right for her to be with him rather than have a threesome with Ryder. Either way, I enjoy seeing the update and I hope for more :)

OMG you are back....I thought you had left us. Sooo happy :)

So glad you picked up this story again!!! And I don't care what anyone says, they need to have a three way at least once - it would be incredible and sexy as hell!

Thanks for coming back! I hope you write more!

Best story on literotica. Thanks so much. Xxxxoooo

I really hope.dimitri doesn't marry. That's heartbreaking

I was so thrilled to see your story posted. I had to reread the last couple of chapters to remind myself of the storyline. I love this story! Keep up the awesome writing. Can't wait to see how you incorporate this new relationship into the needs of the ruling government. Maybe a revolution is in the works? Go humans! Time to get your piece of the pie.

OMG!! I have not read the chapter yet but I am soooo HAPPY YOU ARE BACK!! This is my favorite story on here! Yay!!! Welcome back!

I love this series, please continue!

Good story, but you really need to proof read or get someone to edit.

Welcome back! Thank you for returning to continue your story. You made my and your others fans day. I can't wait to see how these three friends/lovers journey continues! All the best!

iv seen to many good stories end up un finished and im glad this wont be one of them i look forward to the next chapter and any more after it

I'm so glad you have continued this story! I never stopped waiting for the next installment because I LOVE it. So good! Thank you!

So I'm ago excited your continuing with this story. I loved the vampire story u wrote before. I didn't want to read this one cuz it didn't seem like u were coming back. Well now that ur back I've read and its just as good as your other story Wtg Can't wait for more

I just found this story and I love it.....I am so glad that you r back...

Love ur stories glad u add another part

I was so worried this story would've gone unfinished. I would really like to see what Sera's position will be in the future regarding the Princes, their wives and her status. Would Sera have to have a child, with another man, who would also help the future heirs to see reason? Or should she have a child by both princes, thus making them 1/2 brothers and have to compromise whether their natures not allow them to?

Anyways... just asking questions. I'm happy you're back and will look for more chapters to this story. :)

I was so surprised and pleased to check in on this story and see a new chapter. Thank you for continuing the tale, and in such a great way. I'm really hoping this means more will follow and we'll get to sink into this world you've built even more. Keep up the great work :)

I'd almost given up hope. Where have you been?? Hope all is well with you and that you're back to finish this thing!

Looking forward to more!

I stop lookin for any updates because it was so long. It was just by luck I click on you and got a nice little suprise and droped my phone. Yeah you're back can't wait to see if you'll continue the story

I read it and I love it!! I AM BEYOND excited that you are back!! =D

I discovered this story without looking at the posting dates...... OMG I was devastated that I had been so deeply drawn into a story that might never be ended b/c the author abandoned it!!!! SSSSSSSSoooooooooooo when this chapter posted I thanked all my lucky stars and hope you continue it.

This is an amazing story and I almost did not read it. Still I read the first two pages and I was completely hooked.

PLEASE do not wait over a year for the next chapter. My heart so so goes out for those who had been following this story and u did not write for over a year!

Keeep it coming a truly good story of which I am honestly loving.

I was utterly dismayed that the story wasn't continued. I thought you had abandoned it, StormHerald. I'm so glad you decided to revisit it. Thank you a million times over. This was an excellent chapter. I can't wait so see what comes next. Just don't take another year!

Couldn't believe my eyes, wonderful addition. Where have you been? O.O

so happy that the story is being continued. now off to read said story.

I just hope that sera doesn't become a doormat for the princes/rulers...I am hoping that she comes into her powers, takes control of the government, and frees the humans. that also she doesn't just stand around while the princes mate/marry with others and produce children. that would just be sad.

please continue and update soon.

Thank you.

So happy you are back. PLEASE stay back. I Adore this story and I need to know what happens next. A HUGE fan!

The writing is very good. I still don't buy their relationship though. Maybe there should be more of the 3 of them interacting? Right now it just feels kind of sleazy that she's jumping bed to bed when she knows it causes drama.

I just happened across this late last night. I couldn't wait to get home from work to continue reading! Very well done and I hope to read more!

Love this story!!! Please stay on and continue here. I really missed this story and can't wait to read the drama you have planned next

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One, why was Delilah so appealing to Dimitri?, two she's an immortal by birth supposedly but is she ever gonna tell the Princes, and three won't the populace eventually figure out that she is a human immortal?... Love this story!!

i love this story an am so happy that your back please do not leave us hanging on for another year..

Now that you are back I hope I don't have to wait to long for more of this amazing story. But as all great things take time to create I will wait as long as I have too. <3

I'm so excited that you posted this chapter. It was such a good continuation. I can't wait to see where this goes. I'm positively giddy that you are back. -DC

What a great story and very detailed, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Please more I love it!

So that's why you took it down at first. you posted the wrong story by mistake. HAHA...lol.. nice one.. didn't find this in time to read the screw up, but great update, though it was a little short and it felt kind of scrawny and short on the storyline part. In my opinion if you are going to continue updating like this, please try to post them sooner..... PLEASE MORE...

Can't wait for the next part

Wonderful! I started these yesterday and i absolutely love them. You are an amazing writer. Keep writing!

Amazing writing and character development.. your plot and this love triangle gives me chills is so awesome! I kinda hope she gets her happy ending with one of them though... team Dimitri here haha maybe another lovely girl for Ryder

Thank you so much for continuing this story. It is amazing, and I cannot wait to see where you take us next!

So this is probably the third time I've read this and I'm sooooo happy that you've added this chapter. I hope that maybe you come back and continue, you have lots of fans :) Thanks so much for another yummy post ;)

Love it please tell me there's more to come

I'm so glad you wrote this chapter. It was great I love the characters. Can you tell us if your still writting. I know life can take hold but since one of my escapes is reading I would love to know if or an idea of when there will be more to come

i really enjoy this series and would love it if u could somehow find the time in ur busy life to finish the series! thank you for writing this story

please please please make her choose one of them... This uncertainty is killing me!!!

I feel there is no good ending to come from this story. The men get to have power, wives and a slave whore who can't choose her own happiness. What does he get? To tell them how to run a place she means nothing to. I hope for her sake that you have her meet someone while they are traveling. Saying you love someone isn't enough if you don't fight for that person. These princes don't know love. They should have to see the woman they treat like a mistress have a husband.

The reason they don't fight for her is because they both understand that she cares deeply for both of them and that if one tries to hurt the other and keep her to his self, she'll be crushed and most likely hate the one that got her... Plus the reason they want her to be there adviser is because they would normally try to kill each other and she is the only one who can keep it calm, and/or peaceful between the two of them... reasonably... Also the fact that she is so close to both the princes' probably helps with a part of the story later on, so try not to criticize so harshly, such as saying "I see no good ending for this" (quote from previous commenter on something that has not fully been explained or brought to light... So in other words, YOU sir can take YOUR pessimistic attitude, keep quit, and go read some other story if you don't like this one... I'm sorry, I don't mean to be rude and the author will most likely chalk it up to constructive criticism, but I really don't like when some one comments on a story, sounding rude and basically says that the stories a peace of crap when there is no reason to say as much...

Nothing is resolved, is there more coming? After a huge upset in the last chapter some things were restored in this chapter and then the reader is left hanging. It's troubling.

This is really good. I think u could take this amazing places.

please don't be one of those writers that disappears right as it's getting good!

When you posted chapter 6 last July, I really thought we'd be getting chapters a lot more often, like with chapters 1 to 5. What a let down. Are you planning on continuing with this, or is it going to end up like so many others on Lit. UNFINISHED.

Aawwweeeee, this seems like its going to be twisted very strangely. But I like it! Keep writing! I'm so excited to see what your brilliant mind thinks of next! Don't leave me hanging!!!! :DD <3

This story is so incredible! Please please PLEASE continue, I want to know what happens with the art teacher and with Sera's status as an immortal.

Your writing makes me want to savor every word instead of rushing to the end just to find out what happened.

Please continue this story it's soo good :0)

I have savoured every word of this story! I love everything about it and wouldn't want you to change a thing. But please, please, please finish it.!!

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I can tell you prefer Dimitri, since you focus on him so much, and it is you're story, but please make it a threesome instead of single sexy time with each guy. That would be nice.

I really hope Ch. 7 comes soon!!!

this story is so good. please keep writing

This is my fourth time reading your story. StormHerald please come back and finish this amazing story.

Please finish this. I absolutely love your writing. You have more than just the sex in your stories. You have an actual storyline, you have emotion and so many possibilities for the characters. It keeps readers interested and pondering your next move. I want to see what happens next. Please please please continue writing.

Your writing style is coming so well! Don't leave us hanging!!!

Please give her a happy ending. I don't see it ending well for her as long as she's sleeping with them both. They are using her.

Please!! We need an ending for this.

The story is just too interesting and well done to die, forgotten by its author.

This is literally my favorite story on Literotica. It's amazing please please please write more. It's brilliant!

really should've guessed that it wasn't finished. oh well. Great job so far and it was a pleasure reading. Hope there's more of this to read in the future.

I read all 6 chapters. I fell in love. I want to know what happens! This would be an amazing novel. Beautiful and wonderful and oh too many words that I want to use to describe your story!

please finish this story. all three belong together. they just need to readjust the world society to fit. you can tell she will play an important role but she needs her princes.

Wonderful story but it needs an ending!

I do NOT want you to just end the story, but it does need to be finished. It is a great story, and I see a possible conclusion, based on the information Victor gave Sera at the beginning of Ch.5, which would throw their world completely around. It is also the only conclusion I see that ends with everyone happy, and actually, one I saw at like ch.2, when they were in the hospital. But PLEASE! FINISH THIS STORY!

Another story with no ending. I need to wait to read series that are finished by the authors. So many good stories seem to be abandoned. Not sure if it is writers block or not.

Will there be more?

This story is quite interesting, very imaginative, won't you please continue it and bring it to a satisfying finish?

Ive read this story at least ten times. I want a amazing ending for this story. I havent given up on you. I know your still thhere writing along. Muah your an amazing.author. keep it up 💕💕💕💕

i really want this story continued, this is such an interesting plot it has to go on!

Please continue the story! Absolutely love it!!!

I want to know what happens next and how it all ends. please continue.

Ur story is awesome I have read and reread more times than is normal can u plz come back and tell us what happens to Sera as well as Dimitri and Ryder ty.........

*lil pout*

i thought for sure there was at least one more chapter to this series when i started reading it...... You have to come back and finish their story!!!!!! There are so many loose ends..... Did she ever take the bitter herbs? And if not, who's baby does she carry? What happens with the art professor? How does Sera react to meeting the potential mates of both boys? Just how big of a battle do they have to face with the council when she is announced as heir Advisor?......

So many unanswered questions.... But i have thoroughly loved reading their story. Thank you for sharing it with us. And please, please, please, please, pleeeeaaaassseee.... Come back and continue this series! *smiles*

I need more!!!!!! Please!!

This is the third time I've read this story. I recheck it every so often in hopes that it will actually be finished. I've made up many different versions of the way things could go. I really hope it's completed one day.