All Comments on 'Aunty Sue Ch. 1'

I was rooting for this story as I read the set-up. I liked the slightly kinky confession of the main character liking to sniff his sister's panties; it helped make him real. I was with you until the narrator enters his sister's bedroom. Then he mentions his "8 inch" manhood, and I sputter in disdain. Why are guys compelled to give their male characters big dicks? It's such a cliche. And the cliches roll on; double-D tits, inch-long nipples, etc., as well as entirely unrealistic dialogue. For pure, simple jerk-off fantasy purposes, I suppose the story would work for many people, but I lose interest when the cliches come out. That being said, I liked it enough to want to read the next chapter, though, to see if things improve.

I THINK YOUR STORY WAS DECENT-BUT YOU COULD OF USED MORE EXCPLICT DETAIL. SUCH AS MORE KINKY POSITIONS. U KNOW HANDCUFFS AND SHIT.YOUR A GOOD WRITTER AND I WISH YOU LUCK. YOUR FRIEND WISE

You could try to keep at least a semblance of realism in it. That way, it might have been erotic.

A brother fucking his sister is always good. Fucking his sister in front of their aunt is ewven better. If I wanted literature I'd read Shapespeare. This is for sex.

How did it kick off between Sue and Shelly? Just curious

This author needs to,take some writing lessons,or go out and get some real pussy...Then the writer,will not use all the stupid,grunting sounds...This is the worse story,I have ever read here,or any other fuck site...ripper

Good start but spoiled by misspellings and poor grammar, I suggest an editor will help