by kitten1964
the constriction of the exercise, you did rather well, what did the workshop say and teach you about the purpose of this?
given a 5, in the hopes this isn't a trend
....but a little disconected. I think using the Fibonacci Numbers Sequence in poetry is very challenging. Well done for tackling it. There might be a PFDF challenge there.
Poetry and Mathematics ........ all the ones I've seen make interesting patterns on the page which this doesn't, but still well done for attempting something different
the sequence was red.
For Twelve: you missed the hidden iambic pentameter
For Tristesse: not funny!
For USP: there is a pattern; it's just hard to see, and thank you for recommending it.
you miss the definition of iambic pentameter, 5 feet, unstressed, stressed, in a line
and other than that I don't care
do you think I really go around counting iambs anymore? gotcha.
kitten I also liked your post in the 5 senses challenge, though I said nothing very clean. give us another