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I didn't (ask), you did by turning the comments on. Here goes, the problem with the pantoum is it so strong a form it can carry weak material as long as you don't fuck up the swing lines. You do an admirable job with the swing lines. 5ed with no hemming. But since we are asking mode, I've been pounding this beat on and off for 9 years, seen very little or no comments from you, i.e. submission rate is probably higher than comment rate. A mistake Remec, you learn by how you relate.

I gave it five. A well woven pantoum on Remec's loom.