No content, no connection, no attempt at a back-story, just empty sex, could have been a gang-bang scene from any porn move of the last 30 years - in my mind's eye all the men had jelly-bellies, mullets, and cheesy moustaches, all that was missing was "tchick-a-chow-tchick-a-tchow-tchow" music playing in the background. D-minus, and I'm not giving you any stars, when you start respecting the readers on this site, I'll start giving you a rating; until then, just try harder...
You are a true wordsmith! I laughed so hard about the line "a loud rasping fart"' I was drinking coffee at the time, ran to the kitchen sink and proceeded to expel the aforementioned liquid on the wall and window, continued to laugh about it during the 20 min cleanup.
The best kind!
Great story. Ignore the critics.
This is one of the best stories I've read on here. The descriptive passages are hot and horny, and the hard fucking starts from the first word and continues long after the dust has settled from number 2 son having fucked his Mom. Just brilliant! Ignore the trolls, how about another chapter detailing what happened when Robert celebrated his homecoming?
short but oh so hot and sweet. 5 stars from me.
Excellent piece GA.......now where DID I pack those batteries???
What a door you opened for me several years back when I asked if you had a new story for me to preview and you said yes but it had incest. Because it was you I decided to read my first incest story and what a world of fantasy it opened. You've done it again with this one... Your words paint a picture in my mind and I'm there at the villa watching them... Wishing I was her sister and in on the action!! Nice twist with Robert at the end...
5 stars of course.
It seems as if they were going to have a fantastic holiday fucking mum.
It certainly is an erotic scenario for mum and her boys.
Thanks for the read.
In erotic stories what I want to see is ALOT of Pussy Licking...Just imagine it....
It so ribald; that it makes all of us wonder; how did the seduction of Simon come about? - then at the end Robert? The family obviously has a long history and we want the rest please
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