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Irene's Seduction

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/12/13

I read your "warning" and your story

nothing really impressive about either one

standard cucksuck fare

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by Anonymous09/12/13

Saw Your Warning as Well

Gee aren't you special. Pretty standard cuckold story for this site anymore. Question? In what world is this erotic but to a few fetishists? Sorry Just don't see it

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by H.H.Morant09/12/13

The new standard for cuckold stories ...

...the new guy takes over the wife completely. This theme started in the last year or so; maybe those who write is this genre can find a new ending

It would be interesting to see one of these masochists - why else would they subject themselves to the abuse they get fro ANON - try a story based on one of those many articles on 7 or 10 or 15 rules for the open relationship

ANON won't like those because hubby gets all the pussy he wants at the same time wifey gets all she wants - win-win, as they say, and ANON all agree that every LW story has to end with burning the bitch at least figuratively

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by Anonymous09/12/13

What a totally pathetic piece of crap tale.

Only very, very, very sick authors would even dream of writing, let alone post, such sorry tales. Authors such of this one need to institutionalized for the extreme mental and emotionally ill people.

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by Anonymous09/12/13

Mr Morant

I love you sanctimonious creeps who rant for three pargraphs about what ALL ANON people feel and think about these type stories but never really say anything about the way you feel about it You sir are the definition of TROLL. I used to log on with a moniker and stopped because of the psycho emails I was recieving.I don't vote on a story like this for several reasons. One being it probably belongs in another category and secondly I find it almost funny it is so unrealistic. Does this really ever happen in real life? I know the story is fantasy but...... Come on!!!

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by Anonymous09/12/13

well written

Gave all four inches of this cuck's penis quite the woody. Nothing compares to that first time where rubber meets the road or in this case tongue tastes another's seed. Unlike your friend Oscar, as I feverishly licked my wife's sex the taste, smell, and especially the texture (that gummy coating inside one's mouth) of her lover's deposit ended up with me spurting stream after stream of cum all over my abdomen. As for my wife my acceptance or should I say embrace and my tonguing gave her an orgasm she still talks about.

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by Anonymous09/12/13

There is

a non erotic catagory on this site.

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by Anonymous09/12/13

I Honestly Believe....

That some authors post stories like this to get a rection regardless of how inane the story plays out. Congratulations you seem to have succeeded. Have a nice life Oscar. 1*

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by Anonymous09/12/13

Good and not so good read.

The descriptions of the sex were good and stimulating, but the humiliation and wife's control are not. I can see, and have lived a wife sharing lifestyle, but it needs to include respect between each member of the married couple. Happy sex is fun sex, but a controlling bitch wife won't work with most men.

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by Anonymous09/12/13

Like I've said before the sick freaks have to have either incest or cuckoldry to get off as everything else is just to vanilla for these depraved perverts. You little cucks can bitch about my statement all you want but 99% of the world will agree with me.

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by Anonymous09/12/13

sorry stories of the mentally ill arent eroltic

put it in gay or fetish or if you use the race card, IR
and remember any woman that would do that has no love, no respect, and no feeling for the azz that pays her way in life

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by Anonymous09/12/13

fetish

this shit belongs in fetish as cuckolding is that brand of f-word!!!!!!!!

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by Anonymous09/12/13

please stop writting

give to the world a favor dont write more

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by BigJohn60109/12/13

Fetish.

Read enough LW stories to know the difference.

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by CharlieB409/12/13

Wrong end of the stick

It never ceases to amaze me how like children some of us are. You tell a kid something is hot they put their fingers on it to see and get burnt. Is it the same with anon's and cluck stories?
Anyway I think that this is an anti cluck story, if anyone was contemplating that lifestyle then this should serve as a warning. Be careful what you wish for!

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by Anonymous09/12/13

Loved It!

Whether a cuck knows it or not, it is the submission he usually desires and the wife knew it. What a great relationship when hubby and wife get what they want.
Had to laugh at your foreword as I knew it would stir up the republican trolls. Just like Congress, they hate everything!

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by Anonymous09/12/13

As most anons stated - quit submitting.

Author - read your warning - appreciate the heads up but really, put this garbage on that cuckold site where those faggots/sluts will appreciate your writing talents.

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by x_witless_x09/12/13

Oscar, Oscar, Irene's a beautiful wife

Get a grip pal. 4*

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by Anonymous09/12/13

Sorry

I don't see anyone in their right mind letting the Alfa Male keep hold of the key and never having any sex with his wife again. The wife pursued the opportunity to have sex with someone else which hubby was partially responsible for but the Alfa Male took it to a new level with the chastity device never to come off and the wife going along with it. Don't see this marriage lasting long since it is based on a true story and see major problems within the family dynamics especially with the two daughters getting older and notice what is going on. Hubby should just dump the wife and move on as she is only thinking about herself and all the pleasure she can obtain. Nicely written but only see a rocky road ahead.

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by FullCircle5609/12/13

Anon - "Sorry"

Agree completely. Divorce will be the only option. Yes the hubby screwed up. The wife went to far. However, I think she was already on the way to cheating before hubby's push. Now his life will be hell if he stays. Be careful what you wish for. You just might get it in spades!!
1 for the story and 2 for the writing. Overall still a 1. That's the way I see it. BTW. Hubby is a moron!!!

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by Anonymous09/12/13

I Love the First Paragraph

Written by a paranoid schizophrenic. Hate your readers and then want them to read your story. Okay? Dont usually comment on cuck stories because I dont undertand most of them. Humiliation and degradation by the person who is supposed to love you more than anyone? Does that make sense? Never have sex with your wife again? Really? Have your penis locked up with your wifes lover holding the key? This makes perfect sense doesnt it. Sorry. Not on this planet. So you were right. I will give you the 1* that you asked for and so richly deserve , Congrads.

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by Lecheman09/12/13

Simply Why?

While I do not like cuckold stories you did warn and thus I appreciate it. So two questions I have: (1) as a more mundane question, why was this guy forced to use a condom after they were married. Considering that later in the story you reveal the wife had gone on the pill; and (2) is there some cuckold theme basis on this site that only guys with small penises will fall prey to becoming a cuckold. Seriously?
I have yet to see a valid cuckold story address the psychological elements of cuckolding. Loving Wives (emphasis on loving) will not suddenly cuckold their partners without some form of valid reasoning and trust me penis size (excusing the pun) would only be a small & distant contributing factor.

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by Anonymous09/12/13

1*

This cocksucker doesn't deserve a comment!

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by Anonymous09/12/13

Illiterate?

I think you're referring to yourself. Read your stories and then ask yourself that question. Be glad to help you out......1* to bad there isn't anything lower.

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by m48gunner09/12/13

Hated It

Hated the entire premise of total denial of the husband and the humiliation and subjection of the husband to Len....nothing of redeeming value in either the characters or the storyline.

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by OOAA09/13/13

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fantastic story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks!

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by Anonymous09/13/13

Honestly

She might as well set him free and, divorce him for Len; nothing, no love in this wife or marriage. Ridiculous story & concept; someone should get a .22 to the temple for this one.

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by looking4it09/13/13

Interesting to note literacy is dependent upon enjoying cuckold and humiliation stories. I'll lay down 1* for being a self-righteous ass and offending readers before you even start a story.

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by Anonymous09/13/13

As requested

Didn't read and gave it one star.

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by Nitro7065209/13/13

once again

I liked it. Well written....not too long, not too short. I will watch for the further adventures of Irene and Oscar. To all the morally superior (pornography readers) .... you were warned in the first paragraph that this story involved cuckoldry. Just because you can't understand the fetish doesn't mean others who do are any less human than you. If you don't like the subject matter, don't read the story. But we all know you like it....you're just too phony to admit it.
5 stars

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by Anonymous09/13/13

wannabecucks are always looking4it

cuckings, cuckolding, creampie-eating, you name it, if it has to do with cuck-life they are looking4it

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by Anonymous09/13/13

Well...you never said this was going to be a good story.

But I didn't think was going to be this bad. I can understand a cuckold, I don't agree with it; but I get it. What I don't understand is why he would willingly agree to wear a chastity belt with ZERO sex. Not even jerking off. Honestly, explain why he would castrate himself like that? Why not just get a divorce because that's what this is, a divorce. Why not just divorce him and take half his crap AND still get Len?

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by Anonymous09/13/13

Nitro

You are the quintessential Literotica pompous turd. Go back to your mothers baement she didn't say you could come out. Like you said in your rant This is a FETISH. Therefore it should probably be posted there. Now guess what dipshit Everyone who comments here ha s just as much right as you do dipstick.

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by devilspy200109/13/13

Bravo

Well done, well done. Cuckold pushed and pushed. He had told her, begged her, got her to dress more like a slut he wanted her to be. Now, he is shocked? LOL Love to have been there to see the look on his face. When he sees that she is now in control of her body and her pussy. That now that she has had a real man fuck her with a real man's cock, she will not go back to little 4 and a half wee wee. LOL Do you blame her cuckold? This was your idea. What did you think would happen. Sounds like her stud lover is a lot like me. I make it with the wife, fuck her deep, stretch her out, make her cum again and again. Bust my load and flood her pussy. Then in only 15 min or so, I am so ready again to fuck her tight pussy. The one that use to be tight for cuckold. lol As soon as I have her hooked, and they all get hooked, I cut off cuckold other than clean up duties and any tasks that his wife and my slut require from him. Chastity is often involved and he is better off that way. Oh he gets milked once a month to empty his small balls, but it is chastity 24/7 from there on. One thing you said the stud said, that studs do not share pussy. Well they do not share it with cuckolds. Wimps. Sissy boys. They do share it with other real men studs. I cannot wait for chapter two. Bet our cuckold will soon learn to suck and clean cock. Maybe even suck and swallow a hot thick load from the source.

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by Anonymous09/14/13

terrible crap

there is a bozo called Nitro who says some don't understand about this fetish, I wonder if he came out from the wrong canal at birth.

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by Anonymous09/14/13

4.0 Stars

I flip flopped between 3.75 and 4.0 a couple times.

Moderate arousal value. Generally well-written.

However, Oscar and Irene are both lay-downs. Too easy. Weak on character development, but then it was only a one-pager so there were time restraints. The aftermath of conclusion is similar to that of the fast jerk-off session of a teenaged male. Most teenaged males are quite virile, and it doesn't take much for them to get off and blow their loads. Is that the audience here? I certainly hope not, but judging from many of the comments here, I'm not sure.

Here's the thing. When you get a little older, the *mind* becomes the biggest sex organ. The mind can conjure up some truly remarkable foreplay with arousal levels that include a drooling, throbbing cock. And if you're an experienced cuckold or a long-time wanna-be, there's an excellent chance that you've already been pursuing the ultimate orgasm. It's like a seductive drug. Before you know it, you're hooked. Everything else on the physical/sensual level becomes secondary. Unlike drugs or alcohol, however; the orgasms grow *better* over time. They eventually become, well; quite remarkable. So bittersweet, in that most women can't provide that level of sexual pleasure anymore. However, is this any better or worse than any other addiction? At least it doesn't damage physical health over time.

Taking the above into consideration, if you're going to invest your time writing a story like this, why not make the characters interesting by developing them a bit? You don't have to write a novella, but include more emotional conflict. Get inside the heads of these characters. Much can be done in 2.5 - 3 pages. And if it works, you can always add subsequent chapters.

When Oscar realized that all his previous cuckold fantasies had him in control, but he would have no control over the newly formed cuckold triad, that was very good. But he folded way too easily.

BTW... just ignore the bigoted conformists here that obviously have nothing better to do with their time than shit on those who have different experiences and pursuits in life. Bigots act in fear. They fear encroachment. They're afraid that if they don't do something to stop us; over time, they'll be more of us and less of them. No different that the middle-class rednecks dealing with blacks moving into their neighborhoods back in the 60's. Same principle.

Anonymous One

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by Anonymous09/18/13

Why, oh why did I start reading this?

...since I don't like wimpy husbands?
It was my error for stopping here...
Hopefully, in his next story, the author
may write about a good husband with
a normal dick and a SPINE.

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by Overthefalls09/19/13

You asked the wrong question

You asked "Why would a woman go into the arms of another man?" Well that one is easily answered. She's a slut and a liar. She has decided to ignore her wedding vows and cheat on her husband. She has decided that things like love and respect for her husband are not important. That's why she's a cheating slut. No. The question you should have asked was "Why would ANY man, at any time, want to see his wife have sex with another man?" The simple answer is that no man with a shred of pride or self respect, with any real love for his wife, would want to see that. So you make up this crap in Literotica and pass it off as fiction. It's implausible and unbelievable, like this story. But sometimes people get it right. I refer you to a story written by Laptopwriter entitled "He said no" as the correct answer to situations like this. In this case Oscar should have simply packed Irene's stuff and shoved her out the door. Let Len support the slut.

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by Anonymous09/21/13

UNO ESTRELLA

Slut & Cuckwimp Fetish

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by OOAA12/20/13

EXCELLENT STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fantastic story!!!

Thanks for sharing ;)

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by Anonymous03/29/14

Can't see it.

There are a few problems with the story. First, I'm not sure how she would be able to dictate his future after suffering a broken jaw. I'm not sure how Len would be able to fuck her after having his dick and balls cut off. And I'm really puzzled how the husband would have the time to listen to all that shit when he has two large holes to dig. All in all, it just doesn't make much sense.

To anyone who thinks that response is over the top, I'd remark the actions by the wife and lover are over the top, and I imagine myself on a jury after the fact. I'd NEVER vote to convict the husband.

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by bisubcuckmn03/31/14

Loved it!

Almost a dream cum true. Forget the chastity device and the birth control pills. Make her new lover a bisexual black alpha male with some black bi-buddies, all who will join in breeding both wife and submissive wimp hubbies man-pussy.

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by Anonymous05/04/14

LOVED THE STORY BUT THE CHASTITY BELT PART WAS NOT MY CUP OF TEA

The voyeur husband's character is better developed than the wife's one.
The end of p. 2 should have been the begining of Ch. 2.
I gave you 4 stars.
I read many of your stories.
I liked most of them.

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by Anonymous06/02/14

Fuck len and fuck the wife they both would wind up in a Mexican whore house with Len getting fucked up his ass and her getting fucked every witch way but lose, up her low life ass,the scumypeice of shit that she is.and. FUCK THE ASS HOLE THAT WROTE THE LOW LIFE STORY

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by Anonymous09/21/14

Then he gave her to Len completely

He divorced her!

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