All Comments on 'RTFM'

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ChrispeChrispeover 10 years ago
Brilliant

Very erotic story with great detail. Hmm, now where can I buy one of these.

maxout09maxout09over 10 years ago
Great!

I have read the original and have to say yours is a great add-on. It runs a bit slow but very detailed and a great read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
MORE!

Getting dominated by toys! Keep it up! MOoooRRRE!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
wow

I loved the story now where can I find that toy

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great story, but....

This part makes absolutely no sense, and it honestly just gets exponentially more ridiculous with each line.

"I...how long is a cycle? I mean, how long is a cycle, ma'am?"

"Forty eight hours when run continuously."

"Eight days?" Karen exploded. "I can't miss work for two weeks!"

48 hours is 2 days, so even if there were two cycles it would still only be 4 days.

Also, 8 days is not two weeks.

astuffedshirt_pervastuffedshirt_pervover 9 years agoAuthor
Oops!

I'm embarrassed I never caught the 48 hours is 2 days not 4 error! However, I went with 8 days is two weeks rather than "over a week". I guess I should have used "over a week".

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
loving this

please please continue xx

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Wow was that silly

To get it off, cut it off. Anyone of several tools would do the job, no problem. The rest was just a trainwreck.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Will you ever write another part to this?

Nato_Nato_over 1 year ago

8 working days is 2 weeks. 3/5

Nato_

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great great work please continue this story line,fantastic.

Izzy762Izzy7624 months ago

Please Cary on the story it an amazing story and I want to see where this goes

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