All Comments on 'Favor Redeemed Ch. 05'

And I hope for the next chapter soon because this one was again really good and made me eager for more.

The plot thickens. I wonder how long it will take for her husband to find out from Toby where she has been hiding.

Enjoyed this very much. Thank you. Keep writing

Loved this chapter and look forward to the next. Thankyou for posting this superb chapter you are a gifted writer.

i really do love your story so far, and i hope everything is going better for you now. can't wait to read chapter 6.

TTFN

Lynn

Life happens to the best of us. I'm glad you're back. Great update.

Be encouraged.

I'm glad you're back... I enjoy your writing

I have just picked up your story, actually read through all five chapters this evening, and I absolutely adore it!! So very glad that you have picked up your pen again. Please keep up the good work.

Meelana

I found your story today and it lifted my spirits; thank you for sharing your writing skills. Sorry to hear about your troubles, but appreciate your explaining the delay in adding to this story. Hope whatever problems you are having conclude for the better. Peace.

Annabelle

Thank you all for reading, votes, and for your comments. I was afraid after nearly 2 months no one would want to read this story anymore. Chapter 6 is in my own form of editing now. So, hopefully it will be up soon.

Meelana

Thank you for returning to write your story. I hope you are recovering from your tradegy. It is wonderful that you have resumed you writting. I love this story and would be sad if you never posted again. May your healing continue to go well and take each day slowly as things will get better.

I'm glad that you've decided to continue this and I'm very much looking forward to reading the continuing story. I hope that writing this enables you to escape from the pressures of your life for a while.

Life happens and there are always things that are outside of our control. I agree its great that you have continued to write and yes it's been a while since your last post but that doesn't make any difference. Keep writing and I for one will keep reading.

Two months is nothing! Some of us have waited years for chapters of a story that we love. So don't feel to badly a good author is worth the wait and yours is definately worth the wait. So glad chapter six will be here soon!

Willie a fan always

but the typos were awful. So many spelling mistakes, words written twice, phrases instead of sentences. It was really distracting. Even if it takes two months or longer, take the time to edit.

Thanks for writing.

On the need for better editing.... Just a nit to pick....

I wish you would use less formal language by incorporating more contractions. Won't instead of will not; isn't instead of is not; didn't instead of did not...people just don't speak or think in formal language unless the "NOT" is a word that is specifically emphasized. Such as, "Hannah did *not say anything more after that, but Amelia [did] try to get her tears under control. Towards the end of this chapter you started to use more contractions and the writing flowed better as a result.

It's still a very good story!

Please write more this story is hard to put down you have me and other readers wanting more :) hope to read chapter 6 soon

PLEASE!!!

Great story so far, would love to see how it finishes

Love this st ory

Are you going to update or not?

this is a really good story please do more soon

it is a very nice story, i hope to read more soon.

LOVE the story hope to see more ....

Really want to see more of this story

It seems like we've been waiting ages for chapter 6. Will you please keep us updated to when it will be posted?

Thank you so much for writing such a great story. I hope you are able to put the next chapter out soon.

I do apologize for all those who have been waiting for this story. Chapter 6 should be submitted soon. Unfortunately the real life incident has made writing a bit difficult. I know exactly where the story is going and how it ends, but every time I would go to write it would come out wrong. So hopefully in the next week an update will be posted. Again, thank you all for the comments and the support.

I really love your work. So more please

I am enjoying the series very much and can't wait for to read more.

im hungry feed me more chapters plz lol

I understand real life being a barrier and still look forward to the rest of this story.

~Starla

Hoping you'll give us another chapter so. Thank you

I adore this story, and want much, much, MUCH more of it ASAP! (And by ASAP I mean yesterday...!)

I'd also love to see Amelia become a bit less Mary-Sue, too. She wouldn't want Brendan "going outside the law"? Yeah, she needs to be a bit more, well, real. Of course she'd want Brendan to take Toby out - anyone would.

And honestly future wives don't call their future husbands "sir". That promotes a basic inequality of power in the relationship, and that's not good for either of them.

Now go write. A lot.

I love this story and can't wait to read more! Won't you please continue writing it and bring it to a satisfying conclusion? I can't wait for Amelia to blossom :).

i really hope to see this continued! its so good as the story is building so well!

... and hoping you find your way back to this story.

We would all love to see this story continue. Please update, hec even put up the unwashed unedited version. I am sure that it will be alright. Just write the story as you picture it in your mind. We really want to see it move forward.

Please,

Seeker

More please!!

This is not fair, you build up our hopes with the start of what is turning out to be a super fantastic story then all of a sudden you drop out of sight. Please post more and sooner rather than later..... Who cares if there are spelling errors or any other type I'TS A GREAT STORY...

Myassisdragin.

It's a lovely story and it's going so well! I hope you haven't forgotten about it

...you have me hooked - you can't possibly stop now!!! pleaaaaaaaase

That I didn't check before reading whether the story is finished. I should know better. It's a good beginning, hope you finish it soon.

Looking forward to your next update, whenever it comes!!!!!

I really enjoy this story. I wish you would update it. It's been 2 years. Come back please

You tease us with a great story so far. Then abandon it like a promnight dumpster baby. Please end our pain and finish soon thanks

plz plz update plz .its like u have poofed from the world of living

Please finish this story!!!

I enjoyed this story very much. I have been checking back for updates. But as of today no luck. I hope you are able to continue this story soon.

to many of these have i seen, it saddens me that people cannot follow through with their imagination after sharing it and leaving people hanging

I can not wait until the next chapter.

Literotica has disappointed me I think for the last time. Over 90% of what I read here is incomplete and many abandoned. Flag the damn stories if they are not done. Remove the abandoned garbage. This shit is so annoying.

U need to please finish the story, want to know what happened....

There is nothing worst than reading a good story and finding that it isn't finished and hasn't been updated in years.

This is the 2nd story that has left me wanting to know more about this couple.

I have read all of your Favor Redeemed chapters , Wished for more can't wait until you write more of this story, It's one of the Best I've read to date . Thank you

Good story, so far.

I would love to see this story continued.

STILL WAITING ON CH 6 OF YOUR WONDERFUL STORY!

Great story

I hope at some point in time you are in a position to complete this story

Thank you for sharing your writing

CRW

Ive been reading stories thar are not complete and yet im hooked...id loved to read more from this story...hope that the husband will get what he deserve and more...

More pleeeease!!!!!!

Hope that you come back and finish.

Please continue!!!

I hope someday you continue this! It's so well written and is such a great story!

I love it I need more please

I hope you are well and will come back to this story. I love the world and characters you've built.