A Almost Perfect Awakening Ch. 61

Excellent reading

Had to stay up later each night till I finished the story. Highly erotic and enjoyable. Thank you. Can"t wait to read more or your work.

An inspired story. Certainly one of the best I've read. Every time I stopped I couldn't wait to get back.

Nothing but mindless self serving crap---

By unimaginative halfwit !!!!

Great story

I really enjoyed reading these stories.

Great

Awesome stories I hope with more to come (pun
intended).

What a shit of a "story"---

By a mindless "writer" whom writes his own comments !!

To Long.To repetitive

Crunch it to 15 Chapters

negative comments

I wonder if the people who made the negative comments read the whole series. If I don't like a story I go on to the next. Spending that much time and energy to read story you didn't like and then comment! That takes some serious determination.

(When I started reading this story I couldn't help hoping SiFi would be one of the catigories used)

This was a great saga and I really enjoyed it.

For all you that complain about it being too long, you could see when you started that it had SIXTY chapters. There were parts that were not too thrilling for me, I just skimmed them. This long and hot story rates up right with my favorite. I loved it.

Please keep writing

I enjoy long stories and found yours. I do prefer the stories to have more pages per chapter but can also understand how this might be easier for you. With Larry, Lynn, Mom and Dad taken care of for the future I sure hope you let us know what happens to the rest before you stop writing. I hate unfinished stories!

This entire story was great. Yes, it did have its slow parts and then it had some very great and detailed parts. It has been one of the best stories I have ever read. With that being said i do think that you could have shortened the length and combined pages, but all in all a wonderful story.

A pile of feeble-minded and inept shit of a writ !!

One of the worst on this here site!! By far.

FAITHFUL 101 SAID MY MESSAGE!

And said it very well too. If you left the series for a reason important to you, then well and good; our loss, your gain. If you somehow are not sure if you are "in demand" then consider this as a years later confirmation. Whichever it is; Be Well.
Greg

Brave

Don't bother with the moaner! I just finished reading the 60th chapter and I have to say I think you are very brave to take on a story as long and, at times, detailed as this one has been . Over all very good and keep on writing William! :-)

Yeah,never mind the quality, its the length which counts.

This was one of the most boring and inept mind diarrhea I have ever encounter. Do people actually read all of this shit? Unbelievable!

A Good Story

Many an hour spent reading as I stroked to your characters. People I could relate to. Only near the end did you seem a bit rushed, enjoyed, but like more detail. Reading is like looking at porno photos, the more detail the better. Hope all is going well for you and that you can return to excite me once again.

Written by a faggot.

1 star.

Wonderful

I think that was a wonderful way to end the story. What happened to Carly and Jim though? Those are the only two unmentioned in the story ending.

Stop already

Don't you know when to quit?

Another

This was a really well written story with plenty of characters and lots of love.

This could be a novel by itself and keep your readers engrossed from start to finish.

I loved every minute and could relate to the characters.

Loved it

I really enjoyed the whole story but I think that it needs to continue

Where did this author go?

Please come back and start writing again - you are one of the best ever!

Great Stuff!!!

I hope if you are not going to continue with this you write something along these line. This was the best story I have read up to this point on Lush. Great Work!!

Please continue - SOON!

Hey: Please continue with this story soon. Not sure that I will be able to live that long if it is more than a couple of months. I'm 81. Good shape, etc.
Enjoy the hell out of this story.