Art work was good, story line was juvenile with no character development.
Hi. Thank you for your input. Not really aiming to tell a good story right now. My work for now focuses more on the illustrations themselves (that is, for now designed to be a continuous series of panel-based illustrations focusing mainly on erotica with wild, whimsical, silly themes) more than telling a solid story. For now :). Hopefully when I get more time and if the incentive is there, I could create a more solid story. I am, however, thinking, if my time would allow it, I may do a story-based work sooner or later.
good start Pics are good stories not bad
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