All Comments on 'Dance with Me'

Not my particular, "cup of tea", but a very nice job anyway. 5 stars

Want to complain about the hero and heroine being too sweet. but there are people like that and it is good to see them winning here.

The build, the mood, the insight into your characters - very nicely done!

A very sweet story and I loved every word of it, it's nice to have a little romance in a story every once and awhile and you expressed it very well in your writing.

Thank you for not having the huge cocks and tits I get so tired of that.

So refreshing to have a loving story like this, I hope you will keep writing them.

i like the dark, dirtier, kinkier stories a lot but some of the sweet, romantic ones make me feel just as hot and bothered. loved it, nice job

I liked your story a lot. Very hot! Hope there's more to this story....

It made me feel like a teenager again...the good part of being a teenager, I mean.

Fun, quirky in all the right places. It makes me miss the softer sides of intimacy.

OK so I am weird but this is the first 'Lit' story I have come across where both parties actually removed their shoes, g'wan check it out.

Damn nice not to have the exagerated breasts and ballocky bits so common.

Also damn nice to have a romantic story told in a feminine manner.

without being cloying. Had me close to tears.

Wonderful! ...and I agree with a previous poster, nice not to have to groan at the usual balloon tits and foot long hot dog crap! Yeesh! Nice romantic quality, didn't drag it out horribly getting to the goid bits and neither party playing some guilt trip in their head over the situation! :)

Great story thank you

Warmth with each other is my fave turn-on!!