by AlinaX
Had me excited throughout the whole story!!! Can't wait to see what other stories this author has written.
Looking forward to Ali's next adventure. This one was great.
Damn that was hot. There was just a touch too much repetition on places but that is a minor quibble. I enjoyed the pacing and content very much.
I co-wrote this with Sandy and it was an interesting experience - I'm usually a solo writer, but it worked out well.
Thank you for commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Loved the story, hated the end. Would have liked to see them share her again and again.
You're not alone in that. Even Sandy disagreed with that ending, but I insisted on it.
Ali allows herself to be sold, partly out of guilt, partly out of curiosity, but she's not naturally submissive. Guilt assuaged and curiosity satisfied, she makes a clear statement that she isn't a possession for men to use.
Hot and I loved the ending, seemed in character for Ali, a classic case of topping from the bottom and making a statement about her desires and agency.
It's funny reading that again after so many years. I'm glad you like the ending - it was important to me at the time (and still).
Wow, I really liked this, kind of hit all my buttons. I like partner sharing stuff, but I'm not too big into humiliation so this worked. Also, I realize this was published years ago, but I like the main character, Ali, a lot. Usually I think they're okay, but there's a lot of person in only short story.
Ali's a recurring character. My profile lists the stories she's in, in roughly chronological order.
Now that's a real woman! No matter what anyone else thinks she's got her own.
Loved the cuckold angle, and threesome. Wasn't crazy about the ending, but since it was unexpected, I kind of get it. RT