All Comments on 'The Goddess Ch. 01'

This story is amazing. Keep it up. <3

more more more more more

I'm really hoping to see more from some of the previous series...particularly Voluptus Ludum.

Goddesses, ancient stuff... Great themes indeed. ;)

A few typos/errors/grammarnazialertsetteroffers, but overall a very good read. One big one for me was that old one principal versus principle. Pretty sure the one you want here is principal.

All the way through is one of my many fetishes born from Japanese artists and you definitely hit home with it... perhaps she can do that with thise tentacle arms, hmm?

The sky's the limit, so enjoy playing with your godly powers! I look forward to the next chapter!

P.S.: Totally agree with Onyx. Haven't seen anything like Voluptus Ludum before and I can't wait for the next chapter on that!

This was a great story, please continue

that was awesome more please

The second chapter is now pending, and hopefully will be up fairly soon. Thank you all for your patience and I hope you will enjoy it as much as the first chapter.

Not sure about the constantly cock size, one moment it reaches her chin and then the next you seem to make it a random length. Also the first bit where you just bash religion doesnt really seem to add much. Having a little bit of back ground is nice but you go a bit overboard.

Apart from that is looking to be a very hot story.