All Comments on 'A Demon's Embrace Ch. 07'

ok I am a little confused what just happened

confused. Completely and utterly. I do like this story but what on earth just happened?

We go from learning she's a legacy which I take to mean a fairy to her using her powers. There no in between of how she learns to use those powers so quickly. It leaves the reader a bit confused.

The sudden change - the dream - does that mean that she has always known but had forgotten or been made to forget her power?

Was getting all her soul back the final trigger?

I hope that this will be addressed soon.

Does it have to do with Asmodeus, that he gave her some of his soul? Does Sarah really know what's going on? So, many question! I did see that Zuel's attack on Sarah was a long time coming! She did egg him on more by drawing on his face! LOL

I am liking this story, but I'm confused like the others. How did she get bad ass all of a sudden? Sure she killed a couple of other demons, but she did not know what was happening to her. Now she walks into the study and has all this power & strength.

Also, I don't understand the Darrell & Michael situation. It seems like Darrell bought Sarah from Micheal, but how can that be? Darrell stated he had her for 10 years, but during Sarah's dream the person who bought her from Micheal had her transferred to the auction. It is all confusing.

I love your story. Great characters and lots of intrigue. Looking forward to more of this tale. Great stuff. Thanks

I really like where you are going with this story! Can't wait for the rest of it!! :)

i absolutely love this. i adore the idea of a sexy demon master and the fact that he is also considerate and kind despite his ferocious nature just adds to the attraction, his inevitable darkside just waiting to be let loose adds that hidden thrill that allot of women desire. the fact that the slave was reluctant in her capture and strong willed definantly a bonus for me, tho i wouldhave likes to have seen more action between sarah and chriss im sure some people would agree while others would object depending on who you ask. the details in the story where awsome aswell and i trruely enjoyed reading it and hope to read more in the future

please update soon

i love reading this story and i would love to keep reading! please update soon!

please keep writing! i love this story!

please update soon

I'm breatheless wanting the next chapter! This some of the best erotic telling I've ever read!

Please finish this it is amazing

Lovely story and how it tells of a girl fighting out PTSD after long abuses. I wish these weird pairings to do well and one day happy ever after :) .

Absolutely loved this story ! Your character development was beautuful! I would love to read more

I hope you update your story I know its been 2years but I would love to read the ending of this story

Is there more??? Please!

I love these stories!! They are amazing!!! Please tell me you have written more!!!!!! I need to know what happens to Sarah and Lord Asmodeus!!!!!!!! Please!!!!!!!!

Pleeeeeease add more soon! I really wanna know what happens between them!

LOVE this story. you have to give us more!!!!

This is an awesome story, want more. Hanging on the edge of my seat.

Please continue the story.

You can’t leave us hanging here. More! More!

This needs to be continued. Excellent storyline and interesting characters. I’m keen to know more about Sarah.

I’m simply enthralled with this story arc. It’s a little awkward reading everything in present tense, however I am more than happy to overlook that because of how much development there is. You fulfill the bibliophile in me. The characters are someone I could meet in real life. I can’t wait for the next installment.