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by edrider73

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tazz317tazz317about 10 years ago
I WONDER IF HE IS THANKFUL FOR ALL THAT LOVE

and the liquid refreshment is an added bonus, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
With family like that....who needs enemas?

This had to be the weirdest story I've ever read here. I'm not really sure how I feel about it. Maybe the title should be: "Be careful for what you wish for." Lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
you never think of after the story or likely responses

she gave consent hubby didnt. plus that other cum stuff was uncalled for as was her having simulated sex (so he rapes friend because he fucked his wife way back hyprocrite did he forget the dp). all of this over something the girls are just as guilty of or more so. friendship is dead and if he stays married he is going to hurt all 3 some day, hubby also thought she got over it. their marriage is maimed forever

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
It is so sad

but before I say why; A medical note. It is extremely stupid to put air under pressure into the lower part of any ones body especially if that part has been subjected to trauma. Even the smallest tear may allow air to pass into the blood. From there into the heart which is not designed to pump air.

A few moments of agony as it tries and then the problem becomes how to dispose of Cal's Corpse without facing a homicide rap.

It is sad because people like Cal always know how to get what they want only to find that it is not what they wanted. They have never learned that happiness is wanting what you have not getting what (you think) you want.

Jane and her husband should avoid him and concentrate on preparing Joan for the end of her marriage.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Sick bitch

Take your stories and shove it up your arse you sick fuck

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Never any consequences in your stories Ed.

Why wouldn't Cal go right to the hospital and then have them call the Police? His wife and Wendell are guilty of a number of serious crimes that will end up with them spending years in prison. If they get that far. I wonder if Cal just kills them? How about if Cal simply bit Joan so hard she bled and had to leave to the hospital? Why would Wendell agree to ANY of this? That alone makes no sense. But none of your stories make sense. Mostly the men have horrible, disgusting things done to them and they never do anything or seem to have any reaction. Again - it makes no sense. You simply write terrible stories of violence and never put an ending to them. Stop writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
But Cal wanted to watch the video

And so does Cal's attorney. I'm always amazed at how stupid people are when they make VIDEOS of themselves committing multiple crimes. Did Cal send her a letter in jail or did he just divorce her and take all the assets while she was in jail?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Jeesus

Nearly killing the guy by choking him, drugging him, raping him. God if they like the guy I'd hate to imagine what the hell they would do if they hated him? Suicide or murder after the shit they pulled.

nancyharpman17nancyharpman17over 7 years ago
A Well Deserved 5-Star Story

I love stories where asshole buddies get what's coming to them. Very well-written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Still a brain sick author and an ugly story!! MINUS 5*!!!

Only laughable that an adult people can write such a crap. He has to be very insane!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Then Cal filed for divorce

And had the Police search the house. When the pictures turned up, Joan went to jail and the divorce sailed through. Ugly, unfinished story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Sickos

Not a likeable character amongst them.

Stupid story. Who needs a spouse so hell bent on physically hurting and emotionally humiliating you. Just stupid. Dont read this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Second chapter,,,,

Cal had taken a week off to heal from his humiliation. "Should I go to the police? Or some friends? Payback is going to happen,,,"

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Agree with Anon4/22/15

Ed, u have a perverted mind.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
More garbage

More garbage,you must be hard up for something tonprint!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Sick!

More sick shit!

Jhbrown27Jhbrown27over 4 years ago
Just too sick

To be interesting. Just way too gross and weird.

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