by MasonFoster
I gave 5 stars. I think the chapter was too short, but I hope you will update soon as I'd like to know what happens next. 'Sir' seems very gentle for someone who kidnapped Lea, however that may be a good thing with him getting her to trust him.
Not a big lover of wishy washy heroines. no backbone. not bad writing though.
Thanks for your comment, Anon! Lea isn't intended to be a heroine... at least, not yet. The character I'm developing isn't going to be passive forever!
Can't wait for more! However, I do think Lea should get a bigger backbone and become less passive. Awesome writing for the start, though!
MasonFoster is new here and this is her first story ( read the bio ).
Anons tend to rip newbies appart thinking they are doing something useful.
Newsflash, being dense never changed the world. Nor expecting more from a free story.
Let's encourage MasonFoster and give her a go.
I see the talent, as well as you all do. Don't rush her into your twisted fantasies. Let her get you into her own.
None of the highest rated authors on here write according to anon requests.
PS: My apologies to everyone. I am really bothered by these Anonymous comments from all these "know-it-alls" that rush into ruining a person's spirit.
Are you a well informed and trained writer or an editor?
Is the answer no?
Then why are you giving advice?
But with this one im drawn on waiting for more!
really enjoyed this, hoping future chapters are a little longer too
You write well. I love a story with a long fuse. I often leave a story if the real action starts too quickly. I'm looking forward to more of this story.