All Comments on 'Overtime'

That is one hot erotic lesbian, and well written. keep going.

Thanks Freeman. If there's interest I might continue Erin and Lucy's evening in a second chapter.

Got me all hot n wet .... Would love to read more...

Thank you for sharing it with us, and I hope there will be more. Five from me.

While I enjoy girl girl sex stories and this was good, the 30F bra size WTF was she thin as a rail with tits down to her belly?

Avery,

I think you need to learn a little more about women's bra sizing - the cup size is relative to the band size and not a fixed size.

I enjoyed both stories you have written and hope you keep going

Sue, In my 73 years I have held, played with, and sucked on a hundred or more breast from size AA to EE and G, 32"s to 54's pert to saggy but never seen a woman 30" around with F size breast, breast of that size would make her more than 30" around.

Avery, a friend of mine is 30f and she is not enormous. Her breasts are a good size (maybe bigger than average but not too much). It's possible that UK bra sizing is different from that in the US but the cup size (volume I guess) for each letter isnt the same: a 30f has the same cup volume as a 38b or c.

Sorry if the size description spoilt the story for you but I did base my description on a real person.

That clears that up, that's UK size.

After reading such a well written, hot story. I can't believe that anyone could be thinking about a bra size?

I don't know about breast sizes in the United Kingdom. Growing up in Europe, my bra size was 80C. I have lingerie from Spain and Italy. In Spain my bra size is 95C and in Italy it's 3C. Here in the US I wear a 36C.

A girlfriend of mine is from Australia and her bra size is 16C, but in the US she wears a 38D, until I read some of these comments, I never once thought about her bra size. Well maybe it's just a gay thing, but all I thought about was getting her bra off so I could get those two beautiful nipples into my mouth..

Thank You _ I Loved It !

Gay Kat.

Sweet and sexy. One of the best stories I've read in ages!

I remember my wife complaining about trying to purchase brassieres. She considered herself lucky if she found an trained or experienced saleswoman.

Yes, there are differences between countries. Though most of the better stores overseas have skilled assistance available.

The other problem is the different interpretations of size by different manufacturers and even among their separate lines of bras.

Similar to how certain chains will alter clothing sizes. From say a size 8 to a size 6 or a 4 to size 2. To inveigle the vanity among their customers.

That is an excellent story, and am looking forward to part 2.

You created a very visual format. Thank you

Well done with much passion. Thanks for a beautiful story.

Hallo Sue,

even after two years and reading it three times "Overtime" is still just as hot!

5&5 _ 5-Stars and 5-Hot Overtime Orgasms..

Your Austrian-American friend,

Gay Kat.

xx

Thank you for sharing it with us!

...with a story this erotic, this well written, must people (men) get wrapped around the axle worrying about bra sizes, of all things???

Not sure which of your stories was my first; but, every time is like meeting a dream lover: seductive, original, mind-blowing heat. Thank you for joy and people for whom I care.

Scatty Sue - am really enjoying reading through the backlog of your evocatively and erotically written stories. If there is rebirth, I hope I return as a security guard - with better eyesight than this plonker!

Love this story. I came back to it again as it chimes so well with me and my fantasies.

Thank you.

Your a really good writer. Love the stories I have read so far. Keep up the good work.

superb, as ever well written

For a moment I felt that Lucy could be too easily taken advantage off, because she was so eager to strip and touch herself right there at that moment. Not sure how Erin would react to this, being vulnerable herself and maybe only looking for just comfort. A picture in my head popped of of Lucy being gossiped about afterwards that she was a 'a big slut, and so easy and desperate she would take anything'. But then again, Erin is a woman and was apparently horny enough herself, so that balanced out a bit. Also Erin asking her to go home with her felt a bit like a relief. Not sure were my anxiety came from...