All Comments on 'Fantasia Concordat Ch. 03'

Really good. I hope the next chapter doesn't take to long. I'm really getting into this story.

I was legitimately thrown for a loop this chapter. I thought FOR SURE that Jack was going to get laid in that jail cell. Goddamn, I was wrong. In any case, another good chapter. You paced a tricky aspect of writing pretty well, as diplomacy is usually too descriptive and in-depth to be interesting or so glossed-over that it's hard to understand.

Even for having gone a while without an update, it was easy to get right back into the story. Even without sex, the plot moved on nicely. Good job and I'll be looking out for more.

when i read this story the first time i didnt get it... but on my second read it was much easier for me to understand what was happening... good job man.... keep it going

good going so far, wanting to read the next chapter

Six months and no new chapter.

Here's hoping opportunity and inspiration conspire together with the author long enough for us to see the end of the story.

Great start with lots of different elements - magic / underdog / good vs evil

Looking forward to the next chapter

Would luv to ready the rest of this story.

I don't believe that the author will ever write anymore. It's a shame for the readers and fans. I hope there will be more but I know there will be no more written. It's a shame that there will be anymore. I believe that this is good masterpiece.

Title says it all

I want to finish this tale, please let me know what your doing or not doing.

JC

Could be really good if you finish this.

I would love to read the rest of the tale!

please continue the story do not let it end here . there are a bunch of things that can go on still , like him doing the unexpected to prove to them that they were wrong and other things .

This is great

i do hope to see more of this story

Awesome. Can hardly wait for the next chapter.