All Comments on 'Lariats and Lacrosse Sticks Ch. 10'

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FA_JFFA_JFalmost 10 years ago
Please not The End

Can't we follow them to state?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
More please!!!!

I agree lets go to state. This is a great story, with wonderful characters. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Casey 1988

Will the story continue the way you did the Wrangler jeans series?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
What a wonderful beginning to their adult lives

If you choose to end the series here I'm okay with it. Though maybe if you decide on a sequel it could be many years in the future. Once the practice is set up, their home is established, and they are at a different stage in their marriage, still in love but older, more mature. Would like to see them cope with the passing of Fred and Jenny(because it's a part of life), and even more so I would love to see them become parents. But if it ends here thank you for the ride. Randy & Tanner make a beautiful couple.

dairetodairetoalmost 10 years ago
Gorgeous ending!

Thankyou.

Been hanging for this last chapter

SilverSilhouetteSilverSilhouettealmost 10 years ago

Kind of sad to see it end....but I must admit, it was a wonderful story!! ^^

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Amazing

Love love loved every minute of it :) What a great story, you are a very very talented writer!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Incredible

I loved your series. When I read other stories their filled with sex and short with no plot. However, your 10 part had me happy and glad I stumbled upon it. I wished we got to see their future. Like kids, a house, and Tanner's job as a veterinarian. All good things must come to an end, but I'm sad to it conclude. Also, at the Uncle's wedding I cried at the note from his mother. Touching was the word for it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Wonderful story

Please continue this story! My favorite by far of any story I have read, very very well done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Amazing

I'm in love with this story and the characters I never want it to end

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Loved it!

This writing and these characters reminded me of another series you can find here called Wrangler Butt and it's sequel Maverick Ranch. I love the story line that is weaved through the incredibly descriptive sex scenes. I wishould the boys had mutually agreed to try a threescore with the waiter or a foursome with Kip and his boyfriend just to get to read the details of it. It is a huge turn on for me to know another man finds me attractive. These boys kept having everyone after them. Would also love to see a picture of two guys who looked like these two. They both sound SO sexy

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
so sorry

I have just seen the comment from that idiot saying it was similar to all your other writings. Dick Head.

Love this story as well as all others. You should continue this one, as you could have fun with the great characters you have created. Might be fun , when they adopt kids as well. Just a thought. Keep the brilliant writing going my friend. I love it

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

when are you going to write the next 10 chapters? I hope it won't be to long a waite terrific story I loved it . nev .

Kmax1958Kmax1958about 3 years ago

Fun story. I love reading about places I’ve actually been and live near to. It makes the story that much more real! (I’m in Tulsa). Keep writing - you do good work!

Ginger630Ginger630over 2 years ago

I think this was the 4th or 5th time I’ve read this series. One of my favorites!!!!! Maybe do an epilogue? I would love to see these two running the clinic and with a family.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Superb. One of my top ten on Literotica.

The progression through their relationship was totally believable and involving - like being a third party to it all.

The ending seems natural - they have a strong bond which will see them through whatever life has to offer.

Thank you reddirtwriter for creating and sharing this story - I for one will come back to it again and again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Very Good, I loved it! Thank you. 🥰🥰🥰

sacottsfoxsacottsfox8 months ago

Man, I just finished reading this story for the 6th time. It never ceases to charm and make me cry - these two guys are so believable and so much in love. Just beautiful. I sure wish you would develop this story further as you did with the Wrangler Butts series in the Double Trouble chapters. I'd love to follow Tanner and Randy through college and their setting up the clinic and building their house - what a beautiful story that would be. Thank you for writing this wonderful tale.

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