The pace and timing of your writing is absolutely on tap! You hit the peaks with uncanny accuracy, and the language is perfectly appropriate without hyperbole. I, honestly, can't wait for the next part. PLEASE keep writing!
A top piece of writing. Hope that you continue to submit your work.
I loved the story but why did you never continue it?
please finch the story it great story.
Very good story-- total ball busting reading!!!!
It was OK and I got off reading it but after the tears and cheers and all that it just became the same old thing.
come on and finch part 2
Made me hard as a rock... AWESOME!
Love to hear more about the two of them,love to read about her having his baby.
This was a little disturbing in the sense that it was his birth mother.
I too would like to read more about this mother/son thing. I think you did a wonderful job at timing as well... I can't wait to see if he impregnates his mother as well... I'm truly in suspense here... Good job....
If his see is pontent, why hasn't mom gotten pregnant by now? Please update the story with the news.
I like the description. But, yeah, birth mother? That's wrong. Try step mother or something. Friends mother or something. I don't know. Birth mother? (shudders)
No-ones got a cock that big! And at his age he'd have come in about 10 seconds - well I did my first time!
this is an almost straight copy of a letter from Fiesta Readers' Letters, vol. 2, page 66. In the original it was mother's best friend, otherwise events, and large chunks of texts are straight copies.
this story was amazing, i laugh at all the people shocked at it being his birth mother, haven't been here long have ya guys? this is the incest/taboo section after all, and its far from the only story that has inspiration from other places
and to whoever thought it was plagiarism, i read the story you mentioned, he added enough of his own ideas and changed enough facts that its not plagiarism, its just taking inspiration from something else.
great story. made me hard as a rock.
This Is A Good Story
i don't care what anybody says this is one of my favorite stories. its got good description and i like that mom is on top and the way you word the entire story. sorry but i definately don't mind it being his mother, ;)
This is a great story.Very real I love how after u kissed ur mom she went back to her room and brushed her hair.
Please can you keep this going for a few more chapters?
Please do continue. How about involving the aunt & uncle?
good wanking story
The way she wants him to spurt inside her and get her pregnant is what any man would want to hear. How about some more one-on-one action and have them at home and other places...and let's see how long it takes her to get pregnant?
You need to have the mom and son being caught by the others before they can head off home ... this will open a whole lot more to the story ...
Please you have to continue! I loved all the sexy details and I am hungry for more.
great story best ever!
In this fine and very humane story, a mother who hasn't been fucked since her beloved husband died, years before, is living with her good looking well-built son! As a normal teenager her boy is naturally very attracted to his mother's needful cunt! As with any healthy son, that's his great GOAL (finally it'll be "He shoots! He scores!"). The bottom line is MOM NEEDS IT and she needs it BAD! Her son gives her a good hard dose of his stiff fat dick, which turns out to be the biggest his mother has ever seen, let alone had all the way up her maternal twat! The boy is insistent, aggressive as the male should be, and his Mom just melts and eagerly opens her legs real wide to welcome her son's triumphant hard prick up the same cunt he came out of where he blows his big balls! Her son takes real good care of his mother's needs, he's proud that he can do that as her man, and Mom loves him all the more for it!
I loved it! This wants me to have sex with my mom, lol. You should make a sequal!
This was a nice beginning. I only hope you will find it in you to finish the story.
Excellent story with appropriate climax but the mother should protest even more which would build more strong interest!!
Hope the sequel contains some other mother son climax situations.. I advise you in making a new one as continuing this will be little boring sort of..
I enjoyed it and wank-ed once even!!
Sooo fucking hot! Keep it cumming, 'cause I did:D
plz wrote more of this story :)
Damn good... keep writing.
Good story but I'd give the characters a name. This makes the story so much more real.
About her wanting him to make her pregnant. I thought that might have been the hottest thing she said. You should do another chapter expanding on this one sentence.
And I agree with the last commenter. A boy sticking his fat young prick up his mother's mommy-hole is great and blowing his young balls up his own mother's cunt should be SOP (standard operating procedure) between a son and his mom. But top of the heap is a boy getting his own mother pregnant, fucking a baby up the same twat he came out of as a little baby. That's what the boy's potent sperm is FOR!
We all have our own particular tastes in 'mum/son incest' and I have to say that your particular writings are entirely to my liking. It has all the ingredients to light my fire and I thank you for your great effort, whatever you do please please keep on writing.
LOVED your story. However all the uug's and oooh's got to be a little much. Please keep up the good work. Looking forward to the next chapter.
we are waiting ??? 5
Two things. First, since you're still writing on the site, finish the fucking story. You wrote this over 11 years ago. If you didn't want it to be a multi chapter story, you shouldn't have put "to be continued" at the end.
Second, stop with the "erm's". They're just fucking confusing thrown into the sentence like that.
In the very beginning you put he doesn't know any girls is age but yet he's made out with them. Doesn't make sense
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