by Shutterbug_fem
What She is....Is the new Miss Marple/Sherlock/Monk rolled into a new character, TK U MLJ LV NV
Stopped reading after this: "No it didn't kill him, but it probably would have been better for her, if the gun thug had been better at his job." What a jerk.
Did not work for me.
Plot is okay, but your description of scene and your dialogue just failed.
Try again, please
AMerryMan