All Comments on 'Neighborhood Dad Ch. 14'

I love your style.and have kept up with your series. Thank you for a realistic story. I love it and look forward to the next chapter.

Your story is so good always look forward to the next chapter , love it what more can I say

I love this story. So well written. Can't wait for more. :)

You leave us wanting more

Ditto!

Have been following since chapter1 and i swear it gets better each time i read it. Keep them coming. Just started to favorite your story and well your the first i have bothered to do this for.

Glad you posted another chapter, we were all waiting.

No followup to the bikini gal, any planned? Enjoying the read!

Thanks for all the votes and clicks, everyone. I just crossed 1,000 votes for one of my chapters -- I never thought I'd get 1,000 people to even try my stories out, much less like a chapter enough to offer a vote.

I've had a couple of weeks off on vacation -- which should have meant more writing, but actually meant that I was too busy to write. Hopefully I can get back to finishing a chapter or two a week.

Lil Henry

You've done a fine job of not only writing something hot, but keeping me invested in these characters. I want to see where all this ends up, please keep writing.

Glad to see you are back writing on this as I was worried it was going to be abandoned after the first time they had sex.

I really like the characters and really enjoy the story and am pulling for a happy ending for everyone. I expect there to be some angst as I"m sure the other parents will be a bit upset that the coach is dating and sleeping with one of the entire Team's good friends, even if she isn't being coached by him.

I like how you are showing the depth of the feeling between the two also with his comments on how good their connection is and how right it all feels.

I also wonder if his daughter will walk in on them in the morning as they have fallen asleep together at his house and she is just at her boyfriend's.

Chomping at the bit for the next chapter!

Thank you for a great read.

I have enjoyed reading your story! Thank you for sharing with us!

It's an excellent plot and you tell the story well. Thinking ahead to where you can go.

With Paige going off to college you're days as coach may become either less satisfying or too dangerous.

What you bring to the party is talent, a good voice, and lots of musical experience and mastery of music from the good days of vocal/instrumental music. If you can give Randi a good voice maybe you could move to modern country music and start introducing her to the NC equivalent of Nashville - if there is one. ;-)

Maybe you could become the next Kenny Rogers & What's-Her-Name. There were some age differences there, too.

I'm enjoying your tale too much to want it to come to an end too soon.

Any legitimate chance of marrying Randi?

Maybe it's time for Randi to have a recital where you can become friends with more of her peers - and her folks?!?

ram

didn't like that he acts like some moron 'bout this Lori incident. described an adult but acted like a child