All Comments on 'Jamie's Encounter Pt. 02'

by fiftyshadesofwade

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germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4ualmost 10 years ago
Nice!

The story is like foreplay...getting you ready for the climax

elusiouselusiousalmost 10 years ago

I'm really enjoying this story- it has good rhythm. It doesn't feel rushed and I like how you're developing the characters. I'm looking forward to more. :)

JWrenJWrenalmost 10 years ago
Strong build-up

Two brief tastes of foreplay and, like Jamie, we're left hanging in agitated suspense. Will Alex prove to be the lover that Jamie anticipates. Or is the dominant, confident Alex not all that she would have us believe? Hopefully FSoW will provide the answers. Soon!

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 7 years ago
ok

if you are going to write a series of stories you should at least finish it and not leave us hanging

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