All Comments on 'My First Time'

I really hope you write what happens next.

Really great writing! " my growing enthusiasm was overwhelming my inner reluctance " loved it!

I definitely want to read the next part! Truthfully, i thought they were gonna have sex in this story. But, if you can, please find a proofreader so I can make the second part a 5! :-)

Great hot story. Keep up the good work. Certainly got me up! Look forward to the next chapter.

Definately write a sequel, I'm hard as hell right now, nice job!

Very hot story Dude!

Good story! You should definitely continue the series! Run it past an editor next time though. (I made the same mistake.)

That was SO HOT! I washed I was there , I wished it was me!

I love it ,go on let him fuck you bareback

It's been over a year now. You must have chosen your words carefully. Don't keep us waiting!

I wish someone had done me like this when I was young and "straight" instead of me having to wait till I was 32 to finally come out! A lot of wasted years went under the bridge. Was a good read but you need to get some help editing.

I love ass licking - it's just so gay. Some of my boyfriends cum just from me licking their ass holes. What I really love though is looking up at the erect penis and ball sack as I tongue him. Makes me hard thinking about it.

Mine was similar...I just turned into a slut without being asked ( up to that point I had stopped at just wanking or sucking )

Jo seemed to hypnotise me and I just did anything I could to please him

Unlike you I let him cum inside me ( twice in that first night ) and I sucked him off twice too...he returned the favour too

Loved it

To quote a line close to the end of your story: “That was amazing for a first-timer”. Very horny.