All Comments on 'Ashley's Car Trouble (Illustrated)'

Good, keep it going.

No pics are showing after pic06. I really like the story.

Where are the other pics?

From what pictures came up, you're a great detail artist. But this is a good story too.

I'd like for there to be more.

Author here: I don't know why the final 8 renders are not showing yet, but I am confident they will appear. I have sent Laurel a PM about it. I suspect its just a technical issue, since I submitted all 14 with the story at the same time, and they all comply with the TOS since they are not photos.

I would recommend we all check back in a day or so. Hopefully all 14 images will display by then. Thanks for the comments so far.

All the images are showing now. Thanks Laurel!

Like old time porno from the 50's. Great pictures and the story fits right in. Hope to see more.

Being a perv, I read every word printed. Saw pictures 1- 6, with oly a couple that weren't full pix. The rest have little red boxes at the top left corner. From what I can see, I'm very sure I would enjoy all your art work here & elsewhere.

Oh yeah. I can't rate this posting as there are no stars at the end. But if there were I would give you at least a 4 four, as it was an enjoyable situational rape. Loved it!!

Wow, they looked so real! you're an amazing artist!

All the pix are showing now, and they are great! Thanks for an enjoyable story and pix.

FredG

This is one of the best I've seen here. Bravo!

Love the animations!

Thanx for the pictures. Must be a lot of work to put those together. Would love to see more. Great companion to your story.

remember the Boy/Girl Scout Motto....BE PREPARED. TK U MLJ LV NV

Wonderful story with sensual illustrations

seems fair to me 4EC

Better illos than most yarns here but this is still rape.

Love the pics, great work.

I've been writing stories for years but illustrating them with pics from the interweb. So copyright infringement would be there if I published them as pdf. You've written a great story and illustrated it really well. Awesome!

Very realitic artwork.

Really like the illustrations,characters, and storyline!

Amazing more please

Great story! hot illustrations!

Hot detail and wish he was my tow truck driver. Thanks for the great illustrations. Your good....

That was a very nice story. Keep writing, I'll be here reading your stories. It was very detailed and the illustrations were so realistic. That had me hot.

Loved the artwork - but the story is one sick son of a bitch!!! I guess that should be a couple of lessons to all of us when traveling afar. 1. Be sure your cellphone has a FULL charge! 2. Be sure you have a VALID credit card to get you out of an uncomfortable situation. 3. Stay the fuck off of unknown wilderness roads! Guaranteed trouble awaits you out there.

Incidentally - this is the epitome of the idea of a super nasty fuck! I can't believe the bitch cummed while it was going on!

Made me so wet! Very hot!

I wrote a lesbian-themed story on this same site about a pretty girl and a female tow-truck driver/mechanic coming to her rescue titled "Unlucky at Cards, Lucky at Love?" --- (I know, it's a sucky title) --- anyway, I dearly wish that I could steal your illustrator for it, because those computer-generated-art pics accompanying this story were yowzers-hot, and would have spiced it up immeasurably! Well done!

Well dumpington, since I am both author and illustrator, I guess I'll just say thank you for the compliment. I wish I'd spent more time on the text of this piece actually. I sort of roped it out in a flash compared to how long the art took to create.

Anyway, I read the story you mentioned... It was good. Thanks again!

I don't usually look in this section and when I do I often find it uninspiring. .As you said in your opening the story was basically filler between pics. I am not current but these pics are the best I have ever seen. Loved the individual jewelry, tan lines, stained teeth etc etc

Maybe I am embarrassingly ignorant but those are my thoughts.

Thank you and congratulations.

Greg

liked it..keep writing..

nicely done, i especially liked the pics to help fuel the imagination

Ending please

Illustration's are well done. "The farmer" is actually Stone Cold Steve Austin, minus the steroids. Ashley looks pretty good, however she asks "who could he know?" It's known as the internet sweetie. Her father is not going to kill her when he finds out, because he is going to kill that uncircumcised dipshit who appears in the sex video with her.

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More?

More please do more thank you

Can I please be be allow more thank you

i love it can i please be allow more

I have paid for a few things this way. it is so hot and I save money too.