All Comments on 'Agent Alpha Ch. 09'

Ok, I'm loving the story thus far, all except the part where their wolves talk like toddlers and act like oversized lapdogs. They're wolves, why can't they act like it? Yeah, they can be playful but why talk like toddlers and why the lapdog bit?

I enjoyed the cute puppy act too. The wolves playing was such a cute scene, especially when as humans everything is super stressful. I REALLY want to see what happened to poor A's sister!

I love the contents of this story, the plot, the characters, it's really good, I just wish the talk would be deeper and more romantic :). When he started saying that he's either her boyfriend or not, I got all excited, I though - finally, here it comes, the declaration of feelings etc. - but the talk was kind of underwhelming - please give us romance! Won't you please make their conversations more heartfelt and romantic? Please? I really do love this story, and a deeper romantic expression would make it even more perfect!

Love her. More. More. More. 5 stars!

Now these two stubborn fools are starting to understand each other. Communication does help but they will have to continue to talk to each other. They will keep bumping heads because both have some of the same qualities.

Wow! Spectacular :-))

Absolutely spectacular, and i love where this is going with rhys and analise. Curious about how attacking the high council will turn out though :p Never stop :)

Please continue, I thoroughly enjoy all your writings and comb the "new" section here for your posts every time I visit, Keep up the great work, A fan

I wait every day for a update!! Please continue !!

This has been one of my favorite stories on Lit. Great story concept, interesting characters and a nicely paced rendering. Got to love it.

I do hope we will see its conclusion.

Would be very irritating if you just decided to stop making these, please continue, and tell us you will be inactive next time

First one I rated I love how it ended but can't wait for more. PLEASE don't leave your readers hanging this is just really getting good.

I loved reading this story and I've been waiting for the next chapter for ages. Please don't leave us readers hanging.

Love the story but it says a 10 part series, and there is only 9. Its been a year now, bummer!

Yet another author who hooks us into a story and then stops and becomes inactive

The genre is rife with authors who write terrific stories and don't complete them. It's really hard to start another story not knowing if it will play out and what the author had in mind.

Why stop a story when it's actually getting interesting..!?!

Well, if you're still there somewhere, plz do take up ur passion n etch out the storyline you had in mind.

This story is really good. Thank you for writing it

i really, really enjoyed this.

I would be very much happier i you do continue for i am very serious when i say, you are a very good writer.

Please write more to this, please