All Comments on 'Fucking of Babysitter'

Boring written ! Absolutely scrappy ! If you are in the bed equal than for writing stories, for sure any woman escape !

Borinnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Sloppy, boring, i could sum this up quicker.

Girl was virgin i fucked her against her will and she screamed and then we got married.

Happy? Don't even bother writing anymore

I understand the subject of the story but the grammatical erroes killed it for me completely. Plus it could have been expanded more.

from http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=86765

The resemblance is too much to be wrong !!

Does he and Literotica know about this ?

If you fuck as well as you write, I feel so sorry for any woman who gets disappointed by you.