All Comments on 'Sleepwalker'

Odd, yet strangely erotic. I enjoyed it. Very original take on the sleepwalking theme.

I love this story. This is the first real roman a clef I have read on Literotica, and it was totally true to the concept. I liked looking at everything from her distorted, deranged point of view and the ambiguous ending was the icing on the cake.

All in all, I will definitely have to keep an eye out for anything else you might write, if they are going to turn out to be like this.

Freaky deaky. 100% erotic horror. Putting the coffee beans in the grinder was the only obvious solution.

Deliciously creepy in the sexiest ways possible! So many wonderful turns of a phrase through-out this piece to savor and delight at least 37 times. Confusing at times, but confusing in that good way, as if the answer lies just behind a veiled doorway, but when the curtain is pulled back, you're faced with darkness more questions, and the dreadful knowledge that you must take one more step. Wonderful job!

I could not love this story more. What a twisted web you weave! You are an artisan of the craft of writing, no doubt, but the erotically charged horror that seeps from your brain is so darkly delicious! I was at times laughing and cringing and gasping and marveling at this perfectly psychologically creepy tale. I loved how distant she was from all of it, vaguely curious but not panicked or ashamed. Atmospheric and exciting.

A deliciously dark walk in the night. You managed to bring together so many different and strange elements to heighten the sexual edge of the story. Very good job.