All Comments on 'My Night Out'

Hot Story!!+++ Hope you'll write more....

Really hot! And smart enough to lead the game!

Was it my arched eyebrows v. straight? Something "dangerous in my manner"? My face? Whatever, I never met a female that was this human. And this makes me soul-fully angry.

smart, honest, simple, energetic, sexy. good story; good writing.

Great story. Great writing. Great sex. Keep writing. Please

I loved masturbating to this story, super hot that it's TRUE, tell more!! Richard NZ

Jenn,

Excellent story, I give it a 10.

Loved jacking off with it.

Steve

I think I'm in love.

I loved your story. It was well written and sexy. You did an especially good job building up the erotic tension during the scenes in the apartment. I hope you continue to explore this theme in your next story. Great job!

Great start! Loved it! Also really love that your pic matches the story. Please do that again! But if possible, but the pic in your bio so we can see it better--the version with your name is too small to see clearly.

I love reading true stories, and yours was one of the sexiest stories I have ever read on here. You are a natural at it!!! I cannot wait for the next one.

Can't wait to read more!

A great story. And I loved that it was true! Very erotic!

Great story! Thanks for sharing

Would love to eat you up before I pumped your hot little pussy.

Can't wait for your next story!

Is that you in the towel?

Jenn, I loved your youthful energy and spontaneity, it gave your submission a truly unique character and made it feel like the work of a young woman who is exploring her sexuality, I truly believe that you are the young woman you say you are (all too often the supposedly young female authors of literotica are actually older men who no doubt love the sexual advances their many readers make through comments like this one).

I felt your story was well written and flowed very naturally, it also conveyed a sense of risk as well as a feeling of adventure; furthermore, it's main character (you, I hope) was brought to life beautifully, I truly felt a connection with her and was very much hoping that she would get the reward which she deserved for all of her bravery.

Lastly, the sex was both wonderfully erotic as well as edgy and adventurous, my only criticism is that the final scene with Charlie could have used more description (leading to a more drawn out 'climax' scene), as it was, the final scene of your tale was short and left me wanting; I would have lengthened this scene even if that meant exaggerating slightly, it would have benefited significantly from more detail and thus enriched your entire story; I would even suggest editing this piece if you want to flesh it out more.

All in all it was a fanstic first submission and I really enjoyed your work, let me also say that if this is a %100 real story that you truly deserve recognition for your bravery, I would kill to meet a girl like you!

Really enjoyed your story.....

A true, first-person account of wanton exhibitionism written by a horny, attractive 22-year-old woman is always going to please male readers, but this one is exceptionally mind-blowing. If I may paraphrase a popular movie line, you had me at "The beers were going straight to my pussy." Whatever minor spelling or grammatical errors you may have made here (and there really aren't many, for a first effort), you more than make up for with your enthusiasm in both living and telling the tale. I know I'm not alone in hoping you'll have more XXX adventures like this one and share them with all of your Literotica fans!

Wow that was one sexy story!! I am so hard right now. I too am curious if that is you in the towel? I can't wait for your next story. Keep them and me cumming!!

WoW what a story girl ! Had me wet immediately and wasn't long before my shorts and panties were off and I was fingering myself like crazy !!!!!

Cant wait to read more.....Dont keep me waiting too long.

oooXXXooo KraziKendra

That was a great story! Amazed that it's a true story too, it makes it even hotter. Love the imagery you set up your descriptions (especially about the towel showing your legs and you catching your roommate checking you out). And you do a great job building the tension in the story, I was definitely getting excited and was really hard by the end. Sounds like you had a fun time exploring your controlling and teasing side.

omg that was hot i imagined my wife in your shoes the whole story an wow what a turn on

Very very hot.

You're brave to try the things you did, and generous to share the experience with us. You're a good writer, and sexy story teller. Loved it!

Thanks for sharing. I'll be back for more.

That was incredibly hot. More please!

I vote for more of your adventures....

This story ends a little abruptly, but the build up is worth it. Nicely done, jenn! Thanks!!

Your story was so well done. The way you were sexually deprived although you teased to make yourself quench your desires in a small way it built until you let Charlie take control of your pussy in the bar.

The sudden cock suck and swallow was exquisite. The thought of you feeling that first rope of cum than taking charge and finishing each rope after was cock arousing.

When I was done reading your story I actually had pre cum on the tip of my cock.

Thank You!