All Comments on 'Tom & Sue & John & Debbie Ch. 01'

Enjoyed the story. Sounds like something two teenage girls would do with their first love. Look forward to Chapter two.

Enjoyed reading chapter 1. Look forward to chapter 2 to see what is in store for the girls on their second visit to the college campus..

This is one of the hottest and best stories I've read in a long time. I enjoyed how Sue and Debbie compared notes about their athletic boyfriends, down to the last half-inch. As they learned more about sex, they had to give it a try--and their boyfriends gladly educated them on the details.

Wow! This is one sizzling story!

Terrific story with VERY hot sex! Well done and can't wait for more! Reading it got me VERY worked up!

Love the first time of the 2 girls reading chapter two later tonight sound HOT !

I enjoyed the story. The drive in scene brings back memories from back in the day!

I enjoyed the story especially the older sister Sally coaching the girl's along!

...reminds me of my own first time 40+ years ago. Especially with the worry about getting knocked up. However, why is it that every time the girl cums the first time. I know that I did not and most of my girlfriends did not either - the guys just couldn't last long enough.

I enjoyed reading about the two girls and their first time to have sex...unlike one of the other comments I guess I was lucky as I had an orgasm my first time with my boyfriend now hubby some 42 years ago! We'd dated for three years and had sex for the first time our Freshman year in college.

The drive in scene reminds me so much of the first time my boyfriend fingered me!!

This is awesome

"We looked into each other's dilated eyes while we kissed passionately. My nails dug into his back; my thighs squeezed him tight as my heels dug into his ass while I twisted and squirmed as Tom thrust his cock deep into my pussy, faster and faster, hitting my 'magical spot' with every forceful thrust."

I really enjoyed this story. Looking forward to reading the rest of the series.

Good erotic descriptions with feel good romance and love. A sweet love story.

I really enjoyed this first time story and gave it a well deserved 5 stars! Look forward to continue to follow this series!

Great first time story and a great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.