All Comments on 'A Pessimists Romance Ch. 02'

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I like the story so far, so don't get me wrong when I say... at least for now, both Dalton and Conner don't seem to be all that great. They have fought over Neil like a piece of meat, in front of him no less. Alone, they have some nice qualities, though. I like them for that. It's interesting that Dalton accepted Neil so easily even after the talk about how his father died. Neil was a bit harsh towards Conner at the end there. I would say that both, Conner and Dalton, try too hard. *shrug* I dunno. I enjoy the story regardless. Hope to read the next chapter soon.

Yet I wonder if the story ends with Neil NOT being with either of them ....but learning that humanity isn't so foul and irredeemable after all.That would be an interesting twist.

Jeez, poor Neil! But glad he's got Chewy and Rabies now!

I just read chapters 1 & 2. Looking forward to more chapters, I can not believe, that you would leave it hanging here, I also agree with most of the other comments. Please continue this story.

Addicting and so funny :-) :-) :-)