All Comments on 'Deep Cherry Lipstick'

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CapriciousRain over 9 years ago

Pure erotic excellence!

6 of 5, brings one to an erotic state almost from the first word. Super sexy scene!

sandymonroe over 9 years ago

The male character seemed to be less confident than in the first chaper. Are you sure you wanted to go that way?

But the sex was hot. 5 *.

Sejanus over 9 years ago

More!

Needs more sequels.

Anonymousabout 9 years ago

OMG OUTSTANDING !!! I need a shower now.

LOVE IT !!!! Keep writing please! especially with the Lipstick vibe !!! I really enjoyed the story line great characters. Outstanding! so Erotic so Nasty. I gotta go take a shower now, everything is sticky but it was worth it. This would make a great video script.

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