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by Tara Cox

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DeathAndTaxesDeathAndTaxesover 9 years ago

You know, I hate that song with an inexplicable passion, (not that that had any bearing on what I thought of your story), but I couldn't help thinking when Diane was giving the blowjobs about that "sucking on a chili dog" line. So help me, I'm immature.

Anyway, fun story. A first time story, everyone having a good time, and lasting love, not just live-in-the-now fucking and sucking. Great job!

bearsladybearsladyover 9 years ago

Loved this and I will never hear the song without thinking of your story. Wonderful initiation and lifelong love and lust. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Beautiful

If there's something moral in the erotic- this is it :) Keep it up!!!

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