All Comments on 'School Ch. 02'

The story needs some very serious editing. The great and frequent over use of "..." makes for confusion and wouldn't even pass grade school level writing. Easily removing 99% of that could improve the story greatly.

done. in next stories, I will take care of your suggestion on over use of "..."

Here, the rich eat at Dominic's and the poor eat at McDonald's. Pizza Hut is like the mid-way point. I thought the people of India are vegetarians? Your first story had a LOT of India. This story would fit in almost anywhere because there's a LOT of India left out.

Yes, I like the story and the way you write, even though you left us hanging on what happened to Nisha aunty. Maybe she's the next chapter ? The scenes of lust are a well painted picture: it's almost like being there. Still, I liked the style of your first story better. I see you're becoming a writer. Maybe someday I'll become a critic !

Thanks. I will try my level best to enhance story and writing style.

Wait for next chapters in this series.

To all readers, couple of new series will be published soon.

Not really good :(

Nice story make her to wear sexy saree and fuck her

"a dog fucking her bitch in heat." a good sample of the illiteracy of this not quite educated Indian.

Your Uncle's sons are NOT your brothers!

I stopped after that HUGE mistake! I can forgive language mistakes, but that's the same anywhere!