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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A little free form association,

From floating to binding and being staked out;

The D/s vision goes on endlessly,

While the natural one views an end point.

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Intriguing

Free floating lines ~ stopping along the way ~ to pick up a metaphor.

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.

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