All Comments on 'The Succubae Seduction Bk. 02: The Twins Ch. 03'

Great job as always. It is very interesting to see the next generation and there interaction with the world at large.

I cannot wait until Eldon finds his sister's little secrete.

Hey man, I cant believe I never noticed your stories have returned. Loving the clever twists and the refrences to your old work.

an idea maybe for you, Jessica seems to be a cross breed with a grudge. I was kinda thinking something along the lines of (at first) werewolf, but now im getting the impression its Emmet's daughter with Alora. Emmet beig a healer ad Alora's physique, combied with Emmet's origin for joining the paladonic knights being his father/mother was seduced by a succubus. Leading to Jessica's hatred.

Another idea that seems to come to mind is surrounding Marchosais/Reverend Chilton, he is a man tha tfights for balace, a give or take kind of person. and a dastardly one at that. In helping to save one woman, another one is taken perhaps? though I do admit that's a more see through idea, maybe a beter one would be to link in what remains of the Paladonic Knights to Varun. Marchosais aimed an arrow at them and might have some business to either rebalance them, or to finish them off, unfortunately that leads them back to Varun whom is being used by the Knights in disguise.

a few thoughts for you and i'll be checking in regularly to see when your next instalment is in

been awhile man this is getting pretty damn hot love your stories cant wait to see how ang is doing heeheeeee 3:)

I mean he has a wife that is a pillar then has had plenty of sex with another one not to mention a daughter that is a pillar two mermaids and some humans there is enough magic in the firs three not to evean need the two mermaids magic to help there is almost no way that he would have come out of that not at least a wizard/mage not to mintion that they were also sharring his soul so some of his might have bleed back through he would not bee as strong a genirator but most likly would have some but it is still Exolent story I have loved it from the first chapter

Good job continuing 20 yrs later with the twins and other offspring . Promises to be a good series .

Good Story lime with character development as well. Keep it Coming!