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I think that maybe, Margaret is your sister-in-law; you inadvertantly lost control of your true desire. Better luck next time, hiding her identity.
Great story!
I get the bittersweet exposure to love by the female poet, and because you put this in romance, I will forgive the limited sex and give 5 stars. Romance itself is not about sex. However, your concept would have worked well in other categories where maybe two Lit authors get together, with one seeking help with a fetish or BDSM or Loving Wives story. Then use your clever extraction method to lead into sex.
Enjoyed the story and the characters, but have to say your description of the actual work on the farm wasn’t very convincing, based on my experiences helping with chores and field work with/for relatives. The nature of the work was legit, but the timing, maybe not so much.
All the usual buzz words for props! Hooked me from the beginning, friends doing shooters have been my downfall once or twice... I second all the comments about the dialog. I've known women who were so superlative in their vocabulary that I'd simply stop saying anything for hours to listen. Not that they spoke for hours, I was simply mesmerized for hours. 5*
Damage control from the illicit lovers. Jack is back from the attack. At least the kids Don't blame themselves for their parents separation. (Consequences, Remorse vs justification)
I only do 5 * and I always comment. Thank you for bringing romance into what can be a terribly difficult subject. I’m originally a Brit that immigrated to NZ in my 50s, but I’m now enough of a kiwi to get the ANZAC strength in our society. I loved the whole Commonwealth aspect, having been everywhere you mentioned except Quebec. Every place! What a life we’ve had thanks to the generations of WW1 & 2. May it never be repeated.
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Latest 15 Reader Comments
I think that maybe, Margaret is your sister-in-law; you inadvertantly lost control of your true desire. Better luck next time, hiding her identity.
Great story!
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A really fun read!! Characters with spines and hearts, great sparks, but not interminable enmity, thank you very much. A real treat. More please!!
Really enjoyable. I laughed a lot!
touching and inspiring,
This is the kind of story I’ve come to expect from you. 5 stars.
I get the bittersweet exposure to love by the female poet, and because you put this in romance, I will forgive the limited sex and give 5 stars. Romance itself is not about sex. However, your concept would have worked well in other categories where maybe two Lit authors get together, with one seeking help with a fetish or BDSM or Loving Wives story. Then use your clever extraction method to lead into sex.
Enjoyed the story and the characters, but have to say your description of the actual work on the farm wasn’t very convincing, based on my experiences helping with chores and field work with/for relatives. The nature of the work was legit, but the timing, maybe not so much.
All the usual buzz words for props! Hooked me from the beginning, friends doing shooters have been my downfall once or twice... I second all the comments about the dialog. I've known women who were so superlative in their vocabulary that I'd simply stop saying anything for hours to listen. Not that they spoke for hours, I was simply mesmerized for hours. 5*
bout time you put you posted something !!! what's been your major malfunction ???
Damage control from the illicit lovers. Jack is back from the attack. At least the kids Don't blame themselves for their parents separation. (Consequences, Remorse vs justification)
Okay, this installment brought tears to my eyes and bittersweet memories to my heart along with a smile. Thank you Sir.
Katzkin
Excellent! A 5 for Four!
Superb! Congratulations! I hope to see further collaborations.
I only do 5 * and I always comment. Thank you for bringing romance into what can be a terribly difficult subject. I’m originally a Brit that immigrated to NZ in my 50s, but I’m now enough of a kiwi to get the ANZAC strength in our society. I loved the whole Commonwealth aspect, having been everywhere you mentioned except Quebec. Every place! What a life we’ve had thanks to the generations of WW1 & 2. May it never be repeated.