together after your poem and art, oh yes!!!! she was thrilling
strip and whip them both -- great art!
"May be quite continental,
But diamonds are a girl's best friend.
A stroke may be grand
But it won't pay the rental
On your humble flat
Or help you at the automat."
Diamonds Are A Girls Best Friend Lyrics | MetroLyrics
"And a time to every purpose under heaven."
Quite the run around, well done. I too liked the illustrations.
but I also find the illustrations very pleasing, They are also educational, and not it the usual way here at Lit.
Nice, Ash. I particularly liked the image and word play of "Seated on Mouse/Truck or multiple vehicles."
Very nice, Mer. This is not a criticism if illustration: I think the words speak for themselves.
May the Lord Ganesha listen !
The rhythmic structure really gave it a flow that captured my mind.
Your poem was sweet and elegant. Well written, nicely done, and the art work was appropriate to the poem. Excellent combination of poetry and art working together to make each better individually and together.
Thanks. This a was my "response poem" to a poem by Heinrich Heine, "Der Tod, das ist die kühle Nacht," and I was trying to come up with a closing line that would have the same effect as his. So I can't claim to be original here, but it is a sincere tribute.
Very nice, AH. I thought the last line was just right.
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