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Excellent!

I thought this poem was quite unique in that it's very different from others that I've read. It also describes almost exactly what I see in my mind when I'm programming my electronic synthesizers and then performing that which I've designed, sequenced and programmed my keyboards to play. Once again great work!

LUSH GREENS

surround the wings....waiting for the press. TK U MLJ LV NV

NO SIREN NO ROCKS

even the watch is missing/ TK U MLJ LV NV

HoneyA , thank you for coming .......

Up to see my sketches !?! Naughty girl , that was smart .......

I am sorry to inform you...

...that there is no improvement
...that can be made to this poem, trust me, I' m a doctor.
Well done!

Ash...

...on her right buttock.
You smart ass making her ass smart.

MEDICAL RUMOURS BEGET

med humourous torts as a away of coping, TK U MLJ LV NV

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A Green E

That was well-deserved. =)

The emotions bleed through your poem. Thank you for sharing, and hope you get well soon.

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Loved it

There is no doubt in my mind that this poem was written strickly from the heart. I could honestly feel the words as I read them. Wonderful job and my prrayers are with you.
DG Hear

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ONE MUST SURMISE

there was an In The Mood involved. TK U MLJ LV NV

THE YOGA WAS PARTIALLY CORRECT

true happiness is in every middle, TK U MLJ LV NV

AND ALL THE REST RECITED

depending on the mood and reflection. TK U MLJ LV NV

ILLOGICAL FALLACIES OR

discrete illusions of grandeur and splendeur/ TK U MLJ LV NV p/s this could have been an Ode. mlj

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