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we were there

together after your poem and art, oh yes!!!! she was thrilling

oh God yes

strip and whip them both -- great art!

a slap on the ass

"May be quite continental,
But diamonds are a girl's best friend.

A stroke may be grand
But it won't pay the rental
On your humble flat
Or help you at the automat."

Diamonds Are A Girls Best Friend Lyrics | MetroLyrics

a place for every lingam

"And a time to every purpose under heaven."

Quite the run around, well done. I too liked the illustrations.

Agree that the words speak for themselves...

but I also find the illustrations very pleasing, They are also educational, and not it the usual way here at Lit.

Nice, Ash. I particularly liked the image and word play of "Seated on Mouse/Truck or multiple vehicles."

Very nice, Mer. This is not a criticism if illustration: I think the words speak for themselves.

A nice mantra -

May the Lord Ganesha listen !

An excellent read!

The rhythmic structure really gave it a flow that captured my mind.

Simply elegant~!

Your poem was sweet and elegant. Well written, nicely done, and the art work was appropriate to the poem. Excellent combination of poetry and art working together to make each better individually and together.

It's from the "imitation challenge" at PF&D

Thanks. This a was my "response poem" to a poem by Heinrich Heine, "Der Tod, das ist die kühle Nacht," and I was trying to come up with a closing line that would have the same effect as his. So I can't claim to be original here, but it is a sincere tribute.

Very nice, AH. I thought the last line was just right.

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