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I love this, it's relatable and funny but still serious.

Excellent

Very much to the point and very true!

Toxic pollutants like hatred, sorrow, fear, anger, greed are cleansed away from

One's Soul by the pure flow of heartfelt tears..........Om......amen........

  on

A BAREFOOT BOY

with jowls of tannin. TK U MLJ LV NV

OR TO TAKE AN ITEM

and adjust its usage, TK U MLJ LV NV

OR A PEAR SLICED IN HALF

and connected by a stem entry, TK U MLJ LV NV

Smile - such a lovely pear

Limits

Seeing something as vulnerable as her tempts the willpower. The urges to overcome while deciding which morsel to pick first is as sweet as the first taste of cool water on a parched throat. Looking for that first quiver as I feel the smoothness of tender flesh. Makes me wish you were closer.

THANK YOU

and may I have another please. TK U MLJ LV NV

Good. SO very good.

That was really really good...I'm a writer myself, come check me out please:
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Thank you.

Pictures

The pics are poetry enough. Well done.

Ache

I feel some ache in this piece and I like it. I think a lot of women can relate.

Lovely

Nothing like a nice nude OTK Spanking , Well Done 5 Stars 😍

Neon , you're supposed to react ......laugh , snicker .....cry ......but since this 'got' you...

You're neuroses is unconsciously / subconsciously attached / attracted to Marquis de .sade et Baron Leopold vonn Sacher- Masoch or BDSM !!! Welcone to the club Boss ! Or Kindly walk into my parlour ---
BDSM spider to Vanilla fly !?!

A SPIN OFF FROM KURT VONNEGUT

with more details and explanations, TK U MLJ LV NV

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