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THANK YOU

and may I have another please. TK U MLJ LV NV

Good. SO very good.

That was really really good...I'm a writer myself, come check me out please:
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Thank you.

Pictures

The pics are poetry enough. Well done.

Ache

I feel some ache in this piece and I like it. I think a lot of women can relate.

Lovely

Nothing like a nice nude OTK Spanking , Well Done 5 Stars 😍

Neon , you're supposed to react ......laugh , snicker .....cry ......but since this 'got' you...

You're neuroses is unconsciously / subconsciously attached / attracted to Marquis de .sade et Baron Leopold vonn Sacher- Masoch or BDSM !!! Welcone to the club Boss ! Or Kindly walk into my parlour ---
BDSM spider to Vanilla fly !?!

A SPIN OFF FROM KURT VONNEGUT

with more details and explanations, TK U MLJ LV NV

That illustration....

cracks me up! I don't know if I was supposed to, but I did snicker.

I liked how you massaged this in PF&D, AH and am enjoying reading this again. It effectively builds towards a crescendo in the 2nd stanza.

I may have missed it in an earlier version, but I think "things" in the first line weakens it. If you can find an image word, it would be better. "Things" is too general. Even if you substituted "lust" in line 4 and inserted "it" where "lust" was, it would be an improvement IMO.

That said, it was an enjoyable read with or without the recommended change or, for that matter, with or without the illustration.

You're growing on me.....

....or your poetry is. This tickled me, made me smile. Thanks Ash.

DROP THE E=GO

and lite up, its Do=Bee time, TK U MLJ LV NV

ANTONYMS, HOMONYMYS AND SYNONIMS

on compare and contrast a circle. TK U MLJ LV NV

Lol that's funny

Lit mixed up

Illustrashuns : my pic of the Red Cheeked Muse was different : this pic was for an illustrated Story submission !

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