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Vite Strozzate(1996) , Femmina (1998 ) and Scandalo (1976)

good for you

I like your stories and the philosophy you use and i hope it is reflected in my scoring. I have only given you a 1* once and do not remember why. One thing I would like to know is how to find more authors like you that are non-erotic without having to try each one, there are way to stories to plow through without some guidance. Keep writing and I will keep reading.
One more thing, in a story with a lot of chapters I will vote for all but only comment at the last one. this comment took close to 15 min to write.
Ed Grocott


Such serious stuff in Literotica. I am impressed.

I haven't seen any Woody Allen movies lately. I haven't seen a lot of movies, lately. The great days of cinema, to me, died somewhere in the 1970's. There was so much done in the movies of that time that was independent and spoke to us from a culture of rebelliousness and self-awareness at the same time. But then political correctness seemed to take over and the big studios went for safe blockbusters and crowd-pleasing fluff that is still the cinema-verite of today. Movies used to make one think about the poignancies of life and how certain decisions can change one's perception in a nanosecond. Now they merely entertain in the formulaic way they are conceived and put together. I am not saying that there aren't still some good movies out there. They are just so far and in-between and hidden to most of the movie-going public who wouldn't know a great movie if it reared up and bit them in the ass.

Anyway, I appreciate the effort put forth in this essay. I usually don't have to think when I read something here at Literotica. It's nice to get to use my noggin for once.


When viewing the Probable Future, Rationally....

....the only escape from the despair of insanity is to think Irrationally and Contrariwise. To all those who hide in their little boxes of self-imposed angst, that the synonym for the word 'Boundary' is 'Frontier'.


Thanks for the comments dreamtalker. You might be interested to know that I am working on a side project set in the angrian march which will focus heavily on themes of nonconsent and enslavement!

I've also finished the first chapter of elfish descent. Hopefully I will stay motivated and get more chapters/stories finished!

Good thoughts!

It's always great to see writers reflect and develop, and it's been fun to see you expand your skills as both series have grown. I try not to chime in because I want to keep my personal tastes out of the sphere of influence for stories (the darker, forced/noncon elements are more in my kink territory, particularly with war captives and the like), but I think it's great when authors are open to feedback.

I'm generally not a fan of "rewrites." I like keeping general plots in my head, and having to retroactively edit timelines gets too confusing. Much easier (again, this is just me) to just enjoy new stories and fondly look back on old ones. That said, the impregnation and assassination are intriguing ideas! (But could be just as cool with a new character?)

As for your POV problems, I know what you mean. Good way to deal with that is to kill off a POV character ;). A nice unexpected death in a violent story, if not done too often, can add some drama.

Anyway, I like the teaser you've given and I'm really looking forward to your stories. When Orc Dominion started popping up, I was a little surprised, and it quickly became one of my favorites. I really don't comment that often, but I am a silent supporter. Keep it up, it's really good!

Well then.

I'm guessing you're not a fan of the whole D/S thing. I don't blame you. Racial slurs are not something to be taken lightly, and I see why you view it as both offensive and humiliating. And submission is a hard concept to grasp (Although I'd be lying if I said I was a full sub - trust me. I've tried. I'm too much of a fighter.) I've met my share of men who simply want my attention just because I have this kink. They're usually scared off by my long list of boundaries that come along with it. But I'm just going to assume that nothing I say will ever change your mind. I'm young, so I have the advantage of only encountering the word a few times (mostly when visiting cousins in the deep south, internet commenters, and a very racist kindergarten teacher), making it not affect me as much. I'll just leave it at that, hopefully not pissing you off in the process, because that is not my intention.

I love oral sex!

I guess my story is similar. I met a great guy who loves going down on me and I am more than willing to repay the favor! he gradually introduce me to 69ing which is my favorite sexual activity, I sometimes cum 2 or 3 times just during that, and I swallow his cum or jerk him off on my face. If I get turned on enough he gets to do me anally as well.
As for it being nasty, wtf? When you're in bed with someone you love and he's making you feel so good who cares? With my guy the more he does "nasty" things the more I want to please him so I'm up for anything!


Hey! I found a blank fillable Seekers BSDM Checklist here:

But of course

Getting to know someone before letting them call you a nigger as a form of arousal is not at all dysfunctional. Nope. Not at all. *Sigh

While I do agree with you...

I think, with regards to your feelings on race play, it's just different strokes for different folks. As a black woman, I personally am open to it, but I would not ever do it in the way it is presented to me in porn. Black porn fails to present the whole erotic aspect to that particular sub-fetish within BDSM, and like much porn, black or otherwise, it seems degrading. I would never let anyone call me a "nigger" in the bedroom without thoroughly getting to know them first. That element of trust and taboo is what makes it erotic, but you'd rarely see that in porn, ironically. BUT I do understand why you view it as degrading.

Looking for fillable BSDM Checklist

Great Article. Thanks for the info. Does anyone know where I can find a blank "seekers BSDM Checklist" to fill out?

My Award

If this story doesn't earn you a well deserved place on 'the list'. I don't know what else will. As for me, you are on my list. Pls keep writing.

To twistedsickmind - AGAIN

You still fail to realize that this isn't about just safety, man. It's about responsibility. If a grown ass man or a grown ass woman can't be responsible enough not to leave a gun where a child can't find it and shoot themselves, then they don't deserve a gun in the first place. For every little comment you leave whining about government intrusion, you actively ignore all the irresponsible dipshits (not criminals - that's irrelevant to what I'm saying right now) who endanger themselves by not learning how to properly handle, shoot, and store a gun correctly.

Yes, criminals will always have access to guns. That's not what I'm talking about. I'm talking about the fucking idiots who actively refuse to take any safety courses after getting a gun because it's "Mah rights!" Criminals don't take responsibility when stealing or shooting a gun, because they either don't care or don't know better. Responsible gun owners do. If a gun owner actively refuses to take the precautionary measures to ensure that they can at least shoot the fucking thing properly, then I put them in the same boat as the criminal selling guns to gangs on the black market; they both either don't know or don't care about the consequences of their actions.

Look, I don't care if you want to own a gun. I just don't want idiots without proper training dying because their kids shot them. I know guns will never be safe, but YOU can be, and if you actively refuse to be, then you're a danger to us all.

Once upon a time in america

A young gang is hired to stage a robbery at a jewelry store by the wife of the owner. To make it "look" real during the heist she tells one of them to slap her around and he ends up raping her. He ends up going to jail later and when he gets out the gang is stronger and now runs a speakeasy. When he first walks in he sees the woman being fucked by several men in a row and is told that the husband found out that he likes to watch. So now they come in once a month and she ends up pulling a train as her husband is tied up and forced to watch her used. The gangsters friends laugh and hold handkerchiefs over their faces till she recognizes them them she offers to let them all have a turn when ever they want. Good movie with several scenes.

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