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This was a tricky one to finish, it remained unfinished for ages until I darkened the background and that kind of resolved it in a way. The suntan mark on her upper chest was a major issue to get right for a while. Still not entirely sure about it. Tell me what you think.
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acrylic 53x71 centimetres
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Anonymousabout 10 years agoThe art teacher Juliet Aristedes has a number of books on Atelier techniques in drawing and painting. I think you will profit by them.
Anonymousover 10 years agoMarguerite, the more I see of your work, the better I like it. This is very well done, and the most erotic of yours that I have seen so far.
But I also see less of you in this girl than I did in the 2 "Simply Waiting" pictures or in "Dream."
And I'm beginning to like you.
Sandman
79TransAmover 10 years agoI really had to look close, think about it. That whats makes it interesting.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoI am not going to give you a lot of advice on tan lines or darkness. I am sure you are onto other things but I did want to say thank you and congratulations. You do look at your subjects.
skirt_chaserover 11 years agoI like how your dark background really draws out the nude woman. Love the vivid colors you used for the subject. Excellent artwork and very sensual too!
imreprobateabout 12 years agoYou've done an excellent job with this. The "tan line" could be modified at the shoulder if you think it isn't correct for no other reason than to bring it within an audience-anticipated view. Not having seen the model's pose in the first stage of conception, I won't make assumptions there. I am all too familiar with what was seen and what is presented as being separate but same entities. The work being shown here is a good representation of just that. My thanks for sharing and all of your work is eagerly anticipated by me.
fathom7over 12 years agoThis is the second of those you have shown here that I have seen.
I particularly like tha fact that you have the confidence to change the person -- body type etc. Again that shyness shows through so well in her positioning in the picture.
You are a most talented lady.
