Red Hot Train Ride

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"Do you like reading?" With the book under her hand, the answer seemed obvious, but I was raised to avoid silent traveling at all costs.
While people of all ages left the cities for the inviting coastline, I had found the rattling train going upcountry almost empty. Some well-meaning railway official had placed us both in the same cabin. Another early lesson - follow orders - made me stay and keep her company.
"Oh, I love to read," her melodic mezzo-soprano voice announced.
Realizing the luggage rack above her was empty, I wondered, "Where are you going?"
Tapping her index finger on the open book page, my sight got caught on what was on display. As the contours unfolded before my eyes, heat poured into me. Was it the late afternoon sun soaking our legs, the failing AC or her traveling gaze stopping at every station my body offered? Finally, her eyes moved to the reservation display above me.
Running over a switch, the train made us both jump in our seats when she said, "Your place, I guess."

Passionate Train Rider

The setting sun filtered through the dusty windows, flooding the cabin in a myriad of reddish hues. Shadows slowly moving over her body properly dressed for a hot summer day. (Color pencils on 5.5"x8.5" sketch paper)

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BlissMaraBlissMaraalmost 2 years ago

I loved this brief, spicy vignette! It appears her reading material is hot and spicy, as well...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Brilliant!

shadow_stormshadow_stormover 2 years ago

Another brilliant piece of work, 29!

RiverMayaRiverMayaover 2 years ago

Excellent flash fiction...and with an equally excellent illustration, too. Five stars!

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