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This is my first painting submitted, am kind of shy about my work - bit nervous but would love some honest feedback and may post more.See part of a self portrait in my profile too.
"Simply waiting" acrylic 70 x 82 cm
This is my first painting submitted, am kind of shy about my work - bit nervous but would love some honest feedback and may post more.See part of a self portrait in my profile too.
- COMMENTS
MASHKAVEEZOover 6 years agoI love your work. Don't be shy. Your art features your talent.
It makes me ask, "Who is the person who creates such artwork?" Your work makes me so cureous about you as a person. How could you ever be shy about such beautiful work?
Oh, well, I am rambling. Please keep it up. DON'T STOP!
Anonymousover 8 years agoI think that your color, form and composition is very good. The shy attitude is good also.
Anonymousover 8 years agoI love the way you light your subject and how your treatment of the fabric around her shows weight and substance. I am caught up in pose knowing that she is pensively pondering something either recently past or for which she is patiently waiting. My very first thought on seeing this was "What is she thinking?". I don't think I could pass this scene by without wanting to meet her and discover her thoughts.
Anonymousover 9 years agoYour art is amazing! You should not be shy about it at all. Would love to see more!
WatcherRobalmost 10 years agoThis work would be beautiful as a painting, in pencil or as a photo. You've captured emotion and mood. WOW! I love it.
srgeekabout 10 years agoIn my mind's eye I see four paintings on a wall, a hallway maybe where the usual or initial traffic flow is from left to right. As the viewer approaches he/she can see all of them, but is forced to consider them individually.
From left to right they are
::: "Simply Waiting" {nothing further needed}
::: "Surprise" {like "Simply Waiting" but looking over her left shoulder, supported on her left arm and hand, with a "Surprised Expression"}
::: "Smile" {In "Smile" she is looking over her right shoulder, supported on her right arm and hand and wearing a "Smile"}
::: "Happy" {In "Happy" she is back to leaning on and looking over her left shoulder wearing a happy face. Note that a happy face can be with or without a smile.}
There could be a fifth painting that would look very much like "Simply Waiting" but be different in subtle way(s).
Thank you for posting "Simply Waiting".
== srgeek ==
Anonymousabout 10 years agoYou shouldn't be shy about your work. All your paintings are beautiful. They look so real you could almost touch them.
spankfunforover 10 years agoThe woman is beautifully painted. She did seem shy! Perhaps more of you then you realize?
Anonymousover 10 years agoThanks for sharing. Judging a painting in this format is very difficult. And I am not a painter. BUT it looks to me as if you are going in the right direction. Keep painting.
And thanks again for sharing.
Bluejacket01
