Wanda 1

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It might not be the size but if those are natural breast those nipples are too high. Yes being an obsessed tit man has made me an expert.

If you are a patron you are a paying customer and are entitled to ask for tweaks, unlike us commenters here on lit who have no trouble.

You mentioned to give the creators feedback but I did not see a link or info as to who this was.

Thanks and glad your safe. Your one of my check for update musts.

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Again Wanda at this point is an 18 year old senior in high school. Her breasts are at their maximum perkiness. Nipple placement is a legitimate concern as Wanda ages (especially after she gives birth) and will be considered as story progresses.

The artist who did this for me was given a real-life model to work off of. I chose the model I gave him specifically because she was holding her arms in that pose in the picture I sent. ENFmaster01 did such a great job of duplicating the model that if there wasn't already naked pictures of her on the net I might feel bad. The nipples were perfect representation of the model.

Being a Patreon supporter and commissioning work are a little different. I'm getting an incredible deal on my artwork as a supporter. A supporter is more like a cheerleader than a customer. It is obvious a great deal of work goes into these. As a supporter, I am helping to finance an artists advancement. My patronage helps the artist find time to practice and build his portfolio. It's still his art and his decision on how to interpret my story and description.

I am still mastering posting art on Literotica and how it looks once posted. I also have been dinged a few times about URLs and links. That's why ENF Dot Com gets spelled that way. Even still I occasionally get those rejected for promoting a website. I've had to re-submit a couple of stories with assurances that the web address is fictional. I still encourage my fans to check out ENFmaster01 page on Deviant Art.

I should have a new installment up shortly. I have a couple good ideas ready to write. Also be on the lookout for new art.

Thank you for taking the time to leave feedback.

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I think that's a pretty big chest for a high school senior. I think it came out pretty good. I had it commissioned by an artist on deviant art named enfmaster01. I joined his Patreon and am going to get one of these done every month. I'm expecting another one this week. I'm getting a great deal as a patron so I don't want to criticize about breast size. He actually did an amazing job of capturing the model I gave him.

I am trying out another artist for the ENF website stories. The car show story should get some art soon as well. If you like the artwork, please let the creators know.

Back to the beginning again. Wanda has bigger rack than that!

As short as your stories tend to be illustrations would be a nice touch.

Glad to see something from you Pugz.