2. Sorrow

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Mary Magdalene or Sorrow
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Aconitum
Aconitum
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Does your soul ache? Did it break?

I can see your anguish, feel it, breathe it.

Did you crumble under the weight of your devotion? Are you overwhelmed by your emotion?

Your silence is deafening. What of the promises? What of the reckoning?

Once a life full of promise, now, you're only left with a doubting Thomas.

Utter despair looks terrifying. Can you tell me why i am crying?

Righteousness gives hope, but in his absence, how will you cope?

Such helplessness is pitiful. The gates will surely be admissible.

Oaths taken, wills shaken.

Unable to break it, have you been forsaken?

Lies cloud the truth, my heart is riddled with ruth.

Belief and faith are what must remain.

Relief, be careful, can be overpowered by pain.

Everyone's watching, waiting, and deliberating.

After all thats been done, there must be no room for hating.

Karma is an unmovable force. Stay true to your course.

I'm sorry you lost him,
but his path was his own.
You must stay steadfast no matter how grim.

I don't share your faith,
but allow me to lend you my strength.

Love forever, your anti-admirer,
may we find both find solace and await his promise.

Aconitum
Aconitum
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Satyr61Satyr614 months ago

OMG!! You've taken my feelings I've had inside since the death of my brother last year. Thank you.

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