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Click hereHe was
a precocious child
"Daddy, count the stars!"
and I could picture an unusually advanced child being so interested. Nicely done.
A child's wonderment ~ A child's plaintive request. Lovely in its simplicity.
From such precocious ones
Come feelings of prideful wonderment
And uncontrollable rage...
I have no idea what 'directional frosting' is but I like it. I like it almost as much as I like your poem.
I do not know what 'directional frosting' is ,but I liked the little poem.
I loved this lil poem. Cute an funny.
So like a child huh.
Might be short, but your imagery is Super.
I can feel myself outside-so very dark- lookin into the childs eyes and seeing that lil *shine*
Wonderful poem~~!!
This poem shows how a title can be directional frosting.