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Star
Dot
Star
welcome to this poem
it is because of thought
characters have no thought
but they exist
because they come to be
somehow characters come to be
on paper
in space
and upon space
friendly
with clubs and dot orgs
so friendly
with clubs and fists
all the characters
welcome to the end of this poem
may I remove my hands
from your shoulders
so we may hug?
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.
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Sparse as the title
Yet with an ending suggestion
Most women I think, wouldn't want to resist.
Sparse as the title
Yet with an ending suggestion
Most women I think, wouldn't want to resist.
well that sure opened my eyes. fancy writing a poem from a tiny set of characters i considered insignificant.
wso
smithpeter made everything personal and intimate. His poem says so much about connecting across cyberspace with few and simple words. Thank you for bringing it back to our attention. :)
--Ange
Welcome to my comment you'll never see.
But to everyone else, read smithpeter's poetry and learn.