A Common Death

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The emptiness of anonymity
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DampKitten
DampKitten
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I die
the common death
of a common life

silent obscurity
insensitive dismissal
innocuous nothing

an empty orb
transparent, delicate, meaningless
clinging to leafless branches
to hollow limbs

anonymous bubble
awaiting
atmospheric intrusion

Briefly lived,
adrift
I bleed
Iridescent rainbow seed

I breed
soap skin children


DampKitten
DampKitten
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MikePaulWritesMikePaulWrites21 days ago

Beautifully done. Thank you.

Paul4playPaul4play21 days ago

DampKitten:

Your poetry is beautiful, thoughtful, and thought-provoking.

But surely, this is not how we see you!

We see the iridescent bubble that shines brilliantly, uniquely patterned with an uncommon life and richly filled with unique life experiences!

In our Literotica World, you do not live in silent obscurity.

AngelsOfLustAngelsOfLust21 days ago

Oh, darling

You are everything but anonymous bubble.

You are a storm and a ray of sunshine

Your Angel

Elaine_MatureElaine_Mature21 days ago

Always making me think.

HottieOlwenHottieOlwen22 days ago

Beautiful. Just like the bubbles you're describing, this is delicate, light and delightful. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

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