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Click hereThe Night slowly slipped into a haze
by words painted on a breath strange
Moon and lanterns lights danced together
Lady Jina soaking in literature feathered
"la France, a stage in play, a lovers stage..."
Dante La'bo continued his poetic say
"Mis'ier La'bo, would you care to come nearer?"
A French Rose asked with an anticipated quiver
Silence was broken when he knocked on the door
"Come in," she said, in a lady like roar
He entered the room as if it were a cage
Cradled his books and finger kept page
"Sit here and read, my dear," Lady Jina said
Seeing a Rose in the buff made his face red
stabling to seat his feet tackled and stumbled
clumsy, anxious and a clearing throat rumble
"Humm, Thy love is not a tower I see ...
but rather the perfume on a Pierre' breeze.
My love is a candle that needs your fire
Illuminating moi's passions and desires"
Dante La'bo strung poems in a poetic pearl
mesmerized and entranced was a Paris girl
Passion danced in flickers off walls and prose
tantalizing step out of the tub, a French Rose
She slid to his feet on a warm summer floor
bare as a bush she was begging for, "More!"
Stuttering pages fumbled as eyes weren't glue
fingers walking up a leg found a tower that grew
"Madam! Are you sure of what you do?" Dante spew
Her hand found a serpent turn to wood and dew
"As long as you recite poetry I'll be here,"
Dantes manhood on the tongue of a French dear
"How do I love thee ... let me count the ways,
Thy mouth is a river of words that you say ...
Your heart beats the tune that drives my love,
My love is a tower but that's not a white dove!"
Moans and groans mingled with poetry stanzas
Lady Jina fondled and feasted on Dantes bonanza
positions and poems were a constant selection
as the night rolled into a lust filled progression
Passion Pranced for two in la France
bordello of Lady Jina wrapped in romance
now only the moonlight still dimly glowed
onward till dawns last prose, a French Rose
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A French Rose~
(ch 1) 'Art of Archery'
(ch 2) 'Dueling Delima'
(ch 3) 'Midnight Maiden'
(ch 4) 'Passions Prance'
An excellent finale to Lady Jina's tale;
what better way than for a poet to get so rewarded
You forgot to mention yourself in todays reviews..."As long as you recite poetry I'll be here,"
Dantes manhood on the tongue of a French dear ...so tickles the fire of blue..
white lightning is all I can say to you...wow me...blue
was My favorite! I can't fathom how you weave a story like this into poetry form, but I'm sure glad you do! It is a talent all on its own, and I'm honored to be a small part of the next series with you, Art. But I must confess - it was all offered though ulterior motives. I'll now have privvy to all of the next series before it hits the boards! <HUGE smile> This however, is a melancholic moment for alot of us here what with the French Rose saga closing her petals. But knowing there's a new flower of your poetry "blooming" soon will help us all perk up! Looking sooooooooo forward to it!
Vixxx
He does series poetry with the finesse of a dedicated entertainer. He does that so well. Better than most!
~L
Your EXCELLENT poem has been metioned on the new poems thread!!!
What a GREAT series!!! Thankyou so MUCH !!!
Yes Art some edits needed but the essence of the work is so wonderful I over look them lol.. but that does not mean you should not (GRIN)... the story is lovely and captivating.. this line was original and therefore one of my favorites of your work..
Her hand found a serpent turn to wood and dew
Originality is rare.. and therefore I love when I see such a description so vividly..
wonderful journey
Du Lac~
you are telling in this series is a delightful romp. True, the poems could be a bit more polished, but overall, they're quite good.
I like the changes you made and this one is my Fav but I also know they are all woven together, all I can say is, Great job and More Art :)
S~