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Click hereA lady in red,
her clothes are shed,
she is pleasing to my head.
A lady in red,
that I did wed,
now she awaits in my bed.
No quaint words ~ the guy's wife is wearing red ~ he can't wait to get into bed...Okay! is this to be continued - or what? Stirs the sensuous imagination.
I'm still trying to figure out if you are really serious in submitting this or if you're trying to see how many people will actually read all three verses and compliment you on it. I am not one of them. It's juvenile, bland, meaningless, and between the nursery rhyme and that ridiculous picture it reminds me of an '80's condom ad.
Sorry...This is shit. This is not a good poem. It is simplistic, and uninteresting. Sorry, gotta be honest.